Teehee, priceless. I actually feel sorry for the poor girl.

Oh, the beautifulness...that was SO funny. I think it's safe to say that I never considered it to be a chocobo. To be honest, I think the funniest part was the mere concept of Cloud talking about love to a bird...

Very nice. _

::falls over laughing::

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I don't know how the fact that his hair is so very Chocobo-esque escaped me before now...but now I doubt I'll be able to look at him straight again!

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Wonderful use of POV. When the speaker sees Yuffie, the reader automatically narrows her identity down to Aerith or Tifa; this presents even more of a shock when the revelation is so subtly (WARK!) exposed. .;

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Great job, cute fluff, and you even managed to angst a Chocobo! You make me proud.

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Thirteenth Nightengale

That was another great one! I love to read your stories because they make me laugh and laugh and laugh. It's great that you can come up with all of this crazy stuff. I never can tell what twists your going to put into your stories. It's great for me and a bit unfortunate for my roommate. Her suspicions of my insanity seem to get confirmed whenever I break into a fit of uncontrollable laughter. So ya, thanks for helping me confuse and torment the masses! MUAHAHAHAHA!

Haha! I KNEW it was a chocobo! Cloud, ha! That stupid chicken-wuss!...No wait, that's Zell...Ah whatever.

SLS, great job. Wonderful flow. Spectacular twist. I loved the imagery and the reactions of all the characters. I was howling with laughter.

mint

Your story gave me a good laugh. Very creative!

Oh dear, that's just too cute! Poor chocobo I think...

*screaming with laughter* too...funny...*dies from lack of oxygen*

sorry, I'm sleep deprived. Lol XD

Adrienne: That was cute and funny! I loved it!

Krystal: Cloud is the one to be glomped, is he not?

Adrienne: Uh...

Krystal: I see you blushing!

Adrienne: Yeah, whatever. I like Cid's line. Poor Cloud does have hair like a chocobo. _ Got me laughing. Nice job.

Krystal: _

That was cute :) I liked. Have you by any chance ever seen a doujinshi comic for FF7 in which Cloud was umm...kinda molested by a chocobo? Your story reminded me of that. My friend showed it to me a few years back...anyway. It was really good. Great job. :) ttyl.

Sora. (Sorry for my poor excuse for a reveiw..:()

Aw...Cloud being loved by a chocobo? Hee hee. That was the best laugh I'd had for days. I really, really didn't see that one coming.

Poor, poor, broken-hearted chocobos...

I didn't think it was OOC.

I just liked it.

It gave me a warm fuzzy feeling inside. _ I don't think this is full-blown fluff, more like sap, but whatever. It's really good!

That is one of the funniest fics I've ever read. I'm not kidding; The fact that she was a chocobo caught me COMPLETELY off guard. Credit alone for not giving it away at all, but not seeming to be purposely avoiding it (except for the fact that it's already been mentioned that the secret admirer's identity isn't to be revealed until later in the story). I don't even usually like romance stories but this one was great.