Extermly cute story, loving it. Very well written.

hay when r u going to update?

that was good!

Well, well, well. Writing the ol' fanfiction again, I see? And I read this one too. It was decent. I liked it! Yes. Okay. How's Canada? Good? Good! Glad to hear it! Slacker! You and your alternate universes, oh, so crazy. Ha! I will take a nap now. Buh-bye!

this is a rather fun work. Excellent writing. It feels like something Sinclair might have written, but without the hints of a tragedy in the background.

Well done, and please continue !
-- Pat

Very well done, can't wait to see more of it.
Ja ne~

Frogs? What's wrong with frogs?
I brought up that topic once before in a peer group, and they were really interested in them. Though I wonder why...
Anyway, the story's all good.

I have no idea why there are only six reviews! This story is great!
Youre writing is very good, this has a great plot, its funny, sweet and I beg you to
write another chapter as soon as possible.

If you want a title, and I don't know if this is already being used or not, but how about "Out of the Blue" since it kind of seems appropriate near the end.

yeah great another R/A *clicks the X on the top right*

Uwahh!! It's so good. Is this supposed to be a 1 chapter story? I hope not! Please continue! You got something good here ^__^

I want to read more, update please :)

ahaha...hehehe!! I absolutely love it! That was too sweet, too cool! Are you by any chance gonna do anymore? Well, either way, good job, and I hope to see more like it soon! :)

*laughs*

I always like short final sentences which kill the earlier ideas :) Good work, I hope uoi can sensibly continue on such a prologue, which essentially has an ending in it. I presume you will be writing about the time in between the prologue and the last sentence of it... who knows.

Your writing's descriptively okay and your grammar/spelling is good, so you've got me hooked anyway :)

-Edhunne