Awww, an interesting concept - very original :)xxx

A very interesting follow-up to the previous story. I must confess I did think that Gimli and Legolas rushed in rather easily in 'Birds and Bees', but given the behaviour portrayed here, it all fits very nicely. Thanks for writing this.

Oh, Rose, this is so sweet! I didn't find it really sad-bittersweet, perhaps, but really touching and beautiful. The description of Gimli's heart, "and the shards divided again," and the rhythm of "Legolas said . . . Legolas said . . ." just beautiful. Very, very nice.

Lamiel

What a great examination of the jealous nature of dwarves. This was heartbreaking - poor Legolas and Gimli. But I'm glad the dwarf paused to listen before he burst in on the two, axe a-swinging!

One of the parts I found the most effective, actually, was the repetition of "Legolas said". It was almost rhythmic, like a succession of painful blows to Gimli's heart as he overhears Legolas' anguish.

Very nice, and I'm glad it had a happy ending!

eep, i'm sorry to say that when i first saw the summary i was like "WTH? GIMLI AND LEGOLAS!" and was a little bit disgusted...

but as i read your story, i found out that your style of writing was excellent _

in one part though, you kept writing "Legolas said, Legolas said, Legolas said" maybe you should change it a bit to make it more interesting...

Ja ne

Rei

Absolutely stunning! You did a wonderful, wonderful job on this!

That was beautiful. I absolutely love your take on Legolas and Gimli, and I anxiously await more!

It's about time someone wrote this. Heh. LOVE IT SO MUCH!