ha, what a great story! I loved the line about "god-and-jack-bristow-knows-where" :-) that was hilarious. GOOD JOB!!

Nah it was really good, are you going to write more? I know it's been done before, but I'd love to see them starting off a new life together. The conversation with Weiss was kinda sad, which I suppose it would be. Oh yeah, i'd like to read the other fics you have just uploaded, but seeing as we've only just seen 'Double Agent' here in Australia, I can't. Damn slowness of us... Oh well, something to look forward to over and alias-less summer i guess. Great start!