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mikebreslau
2005-08-22
ch 1,
abuseVery good - and well worth reading.

It doesn't deserve a longer or fuller treatment, but it does stand on its own merits.
thanks
Alex Ultra
2004-07-03
ch 6,
abuseIt's too bad you have no intent to continue this story any further. I can think of things I would have suggested in such the case as you were taking further suggestions... oh well. I hope you don't mind if I use some of your ideas? (And perhaps some of their connected plot-holes?)

If this had been my story, I likely would have added in an epic-type of element. "The shadows stir behind every corner, watching as things play out among those who had made and taken the wish in stride. For, though made in the name of the light, and done through both Holy and Unholy magics, it had still disrupted the balance. And thus, the shadows plot for the day when it is their turn. Their turn to take things to a head." O_O I could make excuse on excuse, but I don't want to get into that now. -_-''

LATER
Orpheus2
2003-10-01
ch 1,
abuseI actually read this story a while back on Asynjor.com, but as you don't have an e-mail address here, I felt this was the only way I could ask. Would you be willing to let me use the basic concept of the wishing sword 'nexus' for a fic? It would be a self-insert, if you feel the need to know.

Orpheus
dogbertcarroll
2003-04-08
ch 6,
abuseDamn. Are you sure you want to end it like this? There is a lot of good material left to cover. I'd at least like to follow Ranma/Ranco. I want to see their reationship develop now that the Genma's of stupidity are gone.
dogbertcarroll
2003-04-08
ch 5,
abusenor was it considered de rigeur for even a yoga master to have vengeance-crazed rivals.
Ever watch Darma and Greg?

Nabiki exchanged a glance with those around her. "You realize, of course, what this situation calls for."
Valuim? Medicinal Pot? Everclear?
dogbertcarroll
2003-04-08
ch 4,
abuseGood kid. Just as mentally agile as a brick and it'd likely take three bottles of Formula 110 to undo some of the grief his father had caused the child's psyche.
Hey, You could remove all memories of the catfist training!

Kimiko smiled at the way Akane yelled at Kuno and threatened to hit him. Except that she'd discovered upon winding back for the punch, that she'd uncovered herself again. Yes, it must be love.
Is there some strange substance in the Tendo family drinking water that causes people to equate violence with love?
dogbertcarroll
2003-04-08
ch 3,
abuseThe Giant Stuffed Toy of Catfist Curing. I love it! Too bad he will no longer have catfist tho'

I cast out from thee the Demons of Stupidity!
Wouldn't that negate Genma's existance? I love that line for obvious reasons.

"Never gonna be a weapons platform again," she sang softly to the birds outside the window.
AH. Her own version of the never going to be a girl again song.

Land's sakes, this could top what Liao Bing had gone through back in the seventies!
What exactly did she go through?

So far so good!
dogbertcarroll
2003-04-08
ch 2,
abuseLOL This promises to be complicated!
dogbertcarroll
2003-04-08
ch 1,
abuseWho cares abought cannon? It's a damn good story.
Final-Fan
2002-04-28
ch 6,
abuseGreat story. Too bad you don't plan on continuing it.

But I wonder: Did you get James West from some book/movie/whatever or did you actually make him up? If, as I suspect, it is the latter, could you add a bit telling me where he's from? Pretty please?

Anyhow, nice story.
Sunhawk
2002-02-19
ch 5, anon.
abuse(sniff) sorry to see this end on such an incomplete note...

Good story.
BlazeStryker
2002-02-01
ch 6,
abuseI always liked this project, and I hope you offer it for others to continue with.

The Time Traveler: I assume it's Doc of the Back to the Future series of movies.. speaking of which, Ranma should be GLAD that it wasn't the MOVIE James West, given that Blacks aren't given much respect at ALL in Japan!

Ja Ne! (Hope I got that right)
Mike Carlson
2001-07-19
ch 6, anon.
abuseI believe you should continue the story. I has just gotten good. I want to see Akane tied to Kuno. I think it is something she deserves.

I also like the direction you are taking Ranko and Nodoka. Please continue it.
shaggy
2001-07-19
ch 6, anon.
abuseHey,
this is an awesome series. Its hilarious, you've got to continue it. (your not really droping it now are you?). Mixing in Devil hunter was a good idea...

About the round robin, are you lookin for some to co-author the series? do you have any ideas on how to continue it? If so please email me, id love to help.
CyberAngelOne
2001-07-16
ch 1,
abuseKeep up the good work
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