Oh dear lord! This story is just getting better and better! Just the right amount of insanity, mayhem and laughter that characterises all your stories. I never expected for you to continue this story, much less in a round robin fashion, but hey, I'm not complaining! Keep going! This is what writing is all about!_

hurry up with this, this is becoming as wonderful as the twelve labor series!

Now this is great! I certainly do hope that this will be continued!

Hey, I like it. Kinda sweet and stuff. Nice to see Ranma get some credit for once.

COOOL! Nice Story! Good Storyline! WONDEROUS! Have you ever played the game "Afterlife?"

I just wanted to say that I can't wait to see the next part to this fanfic series. It my favorite one of the series you have writen so far beside the Ranma/Sm/Pokemon/OMG one you just rewrote.

cool

Another wonderful start to a Ranma Fic. I like this version alot. I hope you continue it. I can't wait to see Ranma meet the Diggers and the fight for the treasure.

Great story with the second chapter in it i hope you continue this soon along with a soldier's duty.

O_O *doki**doki* O_O *doki**doki* Ano... That... was... different. Definitely round-robin style, with the switch from drama at the end of Chap. 1 to adventure at the end of Chap. 2. The basement was unexpected, but needs more specific descriptions of really weird stuff, like a totem pole made of bones or some more stuffed/in stasis creatures. The part with Kasumi and the water stain was finally addressed, satisfying, and fun. The part involving Kodachi and Sasuke was a nice WAFF touch. The pajamas bit was outrageously silly. And the part where Nodoka is getting ideas from Jared will be a nice start for a running gag, where she tries to mold Ranma's situation to be like Jared's.

Nice story, though again I think that the girls are given too little credit

for character when they're made to just leave Ranma. And please, PLEASE,

get Jared out as soon as possible. Yes, I have come to hate the Jared

character, no offense intended to the real Skysaber. It's the character

who shows up in these stories which drives me up the wall. As one person

said, he's annoyingly perfect. He turns good female characters into just

more members of his already ridiculously huge harem, causing them to lose

much of their individuality, which I consider to be a disservice to them,

and not the least bit entertaining. And worst, he tends to dominate the

story as soon as he shows up, causing it to revolve around him when he has

no business being there in the first place. It often seems gratuitous, I

mean, half the time he doesn't *need* to be there at all. Tension goes

bye-bye, as he solves everyone's problems and hogs the glory from those

who, until he shows up, were the main characters. For instance, IMO he

ruined "A Different Art" when he showed up, by suddenly becoming the center

of the action when he hadn't even been in the story for several chapters.

And it's sad, because up until that point, it was very promising. There's

already too much of him in Fourth Labor... please don't spread him out

more.

With that rant out of the way, let's deal with what else we have. I'd kind

of like to see how the girls react to the realization that they'd abandoned

Ranma in his time of need. I already have a good idea with Kasumi, but

what of the others, with the fact that not only do they owe Ranma something

huge, but that they showed no gratitude whatsoever? Interesting, if done

well. And let's see what the deal with Ranko is, hopefully in story,

without Jared explaining everything. Well, cool premise, let's see where

it goes.

Love what you are doing and i hope that you will keep it up. Great work.

Pretty cool. I like it.

do you ever plan on continuing 'When you wish upon a sword'? I hope you do because I really like this fic.