I realy enjoyed your poem, I hope you keep writting poems cause if there good like this one then I'll daffently keep reading them!

got to go Mel

cool poem :) short but not bad

I like it. You seem to have captured what they are.

I Like your poem a lot! nice work!
isn't it immortal, not immoral.

I like the sentiment, but it needs a bit of editing. It has a nice tone.

I hope you were right when you said this wasn't one of your best, lol. Still, it could be better if you fixed some minor errors. Such as worring = worrying. And affects = effects. And instead of immoral *ROFL* maybe you mean immortal?