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Reviews for: One More Day In Paradise
sielge
2005-11-27 . chapter 1
Sad but so beautiful!
The lovers are together in death if not in life...
theweirdperson
2005-09-09 . chapter 1
I almost cried, and that's not something I can say often. A beautiful story.
PrettySoldierSailorNightshade
2005-02-04 . chapter 1
so sad and sweet... very well written, good work
Tinuviel Undomiel
2004-06-11 . chapter 1
This was so sad. I always wonder what would happen if she left. I though that something like this would have happened, she still would have died even if she was in the Undying lands. I felt sad when reading this, but I understood that they would meet again.
Lombadia Greenleaf
2004-05-04 . chapter 1
Aw sad! it was good though, just remember your commas! sorry, that really bugs me. It was lovely.
SunShadowedDarkness
2004-01-29 . chapter 1
Nice ^.~ It was captivating and very well written, I couldn't sleep until I'd finished it. The whole depressed atmoshpere really fit my mood the night I read it and It made me feel better, Thanks! And by the way...Have you seen Crystal?
Taraisilwen
2003-10-11 . chapter 1
Beautiful and sad! but yes, sad in a good way :)
I didn't read this when I first saw it, 'cause I knew I would cry, and who knows, angry perhaps.
But anyway, I found my courage, and I'm really glad I did :) Arwens thoughts were really good.
Didn'r quite like the marrige with Eowyn though...maybe that's just me... ;) But I just wondered - you said he married Eowyn, and then a woman he didn't love. You mean he loved Eowyn?
I think, he loved her, but not like a romantic love...if you know what I mean. Anyway, as I said, maybe it's juat me.
Your story was wonderful no matter what, made me cry :) and then the happy ending, lovely :)
deskanar
2003-10-09 . chapter 1
Beautiful! An intersting take on what could happen, and very well written!
Tears of Telperion
2003-10-09 . chapter 1
Whoa. That was... incredible.

~AF
Samantha20
2003-10-06 . chapter 1
that was so good, scratch that, it was so sad. Well done.
LiQuYu
2003-10-04 . chapter 1
*sigh* Wow, that was such a bittersweet ending. Arwen did yet she got to return to the arms of her lover. Yet she left her family and friends behind. *sigh* This was really good! I really enjoyed reading this. In this story, you certainly defined love lasting forever, even until the beyond. Well, hope to read from more you soon!!



~Lómiothiel
Andraste Emeraldpetal
2003-10-04 . chapter 1
Aw...so sad...very well written...I love it!
Love Your Shotgun
2003-10-03 . chapter 1
OK...lately I've been crying over LOTR stuff. For example I cryed my eyes out just watchin the ROTK trailer on Monday. Go figure. But that had to be one of the saddest things I'ver ever read! I mean Aragorn married Eowyn but she loved Faramir yadda yadda yadda...but OMG that was really good how you added that Aragorn's spirit came and took Arwen away. And that she didn't even care that she was dead...omg that was so good!! I might be overreactin...but that was really really really good!
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