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Reviews For: Dragonflies in the mist - Reviews: Page 1 of 6

mitch365
2008-03-20
ch 20,
abuseY make it so sad? u made me cry r u happy now?
loved the story it was great
Bloxham
2007-09-18
ch 20,
abusedude ur story was amazing i loved all the friendly insults and just about evrything else. XD nice 1
Isaac
2007-08-25
ch 20, anon.
abuseYou are a Sad,Strange little man,But a realist.
I guess that Davis's new motto should be"SO THAT OTHERS MAY LIVE"too.
lilly-rain
2007-02-10
ch 19,
abuseThis story is by far the best ive ever read. It was very touching, and i can honesly say that that ending brought me tears. I believe there was no better way to end that story, and u made that ending perfect...
Lilly
Cinful aka Miricles-3
2005-06-09
ch 2,
abuseHehe, I'm just going back and re-reading for fun, don't mind me ^_^
Fan Fiction Story Rater
2005-05-29
ch 3,
abuseI like this story! But it doesn't seem like a dakari, or maybe thats because I haven't got to the dakari parts yet.;_; Well, I have a dakari site that I ask you to see, can you go to it?

The URL:

You don't have to see it, if you don't want to.

And, if you can, could you give me a URL to another dakari site? PLEASE! PLEASE!
Falcon
2005-05-15
ch 20, anon.
abuseHey, remember me? XP NVM if you don't. But great fic, I loved it, even to the point of the "Thank You's and stuff" section, which is rare for me. It gave me a brief glimpse into the mind of the writer, I must say I was curious as to why you killed off Davis. Though I loved it anyways. XD
Darkmagicain159
2005-01-10
ch 20, anon.
abusedespite what you said, it was really a good fic.i dont really know how to finish this... so um good luck with future fics!
Yurrei
2004-12-27
ch 20,
abusethis was the best story i have ever read in digimon! thank u for thankin me. lol. anyway this was a great story.
Lita Maxwell
2004-12-12
ch 20, anon.
abuseAre you gonna write more Daikaris? I can't wait! Oh, if you're gonna write a Gundam Wing story...you better forget about Duo Maxwell being in it. Heh heh.

*In Lita's room far far away...Duo Maxwell is playing her PS2.*

Duo: Uh oh...I hope she won't kill me that I accidentally threw out that Inuyasha game and her manga...

?: DUO MAXWELL!
Duo: Oh **!
*Davis suddenly appears*
Davis: Haha! Sucks to be you!!
Yurrei
2004-12-04
ch 1,
abuseyo make another chapter soon, your like killing me here. this is a great story so please make another chapter soon. i am looking forward to reading the next chapter. hope you can work on this fast, good and more chapters cause it's awesome. wish you luck on finishing this story. one of your people that enjoy good stories.
Cinful aka Miricles-3
2004-11-29
ch 19,
abusePerfect.
Cinful aka Miricles-3
2004-11-29
ch 18,
abuseHow annoying and extremly kool at the same time. That's perfectly In-Character of Davis, that had to be the perfect end to Dragon Flies in the Mist, you, my freind, are a great writer. 20 out of 10.
Kaeera
2004-11-28
ch 20, anon.
abuseAn interesting end, but nonetheless a good one. I must admit, I didn't expect you to kill Davis, but then again, when I think over it, it kind of makes sense. At least he's got his peace now; that's more than some living people can say.

I know that it can be horrible if you have to finish a story you don't want to write anymore. I appreciate that you took the time to sit down and write the rest of it; and it really wasn't bad, in fact, I liked it. Seeing the darker side of Davis is something we don't see often, and you did a beautiful job in portraying it. Great Job, Ben - hope to see more from you soon!
Anthony1
2004-11-27
ch 20,
abuseAt long last you have finished this story and I must say that out of all your other stories this one was more darker than all of them. Having Davis die was a surprise but I can see the reason why you did it.

Before I go, I want to say thanks for the mention in your 'thank you' chapter. I really appreciated it. Until you put up another story, see ya.
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