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BondageSeraph
2003-11-06 . chapter 1
I love Sirius x Remus. Very good vinagette. I applaud you on your creativity! *claps*
Rocky Vladimir
2003-10-30 . chapter 1
This is really lovely. It's just a settle moment, a settle beat that most people would take for granted. :)
Diva937
2003-10-06 . chapter 1
That's weird... you haven't read the 5th book, but this fits with the 5th book so well... and I know why you don't want to read it... I kept putting off finishing it, cuz i didn't want to get to the death... I was randomly bursting into tears for weeks... and I'd start crying harder if anyone asked me what was wrong... ANYWAY, back to your story. It was AMAZING. The last line gave me chills. It was extremely well written. Good job!
Polkat
2003-10-05 . chapter 1
you haven't read the fifth book?... that makes your story make a hellava lot less sense. still very good but i'm wondering why the book remains unread. however dark it is still harry potter.. be off with you now. go and read it.
Random Rockstar
2003-10-04 . chapter 1
Aw! That was wicked sad. It was cute though - in an angsty way. Heehee. And good luck with the 5th book; depressed me, anyway. Heh. It's good though.

I did love this story. Wonderful. Great job. ^_^

-Random Rockstar Lizzie-

-Gently, silently . . . I'm dying inside.-
Sara Dawson
2003-10-04 . chapter 1
Gorgeous. Absolutely gorgeous. I love how you use the coffee as a... what do you call it... plot device? metaphor? to take Remus through his life. I've always thought that his adult life was really marked only by when he was with Sirius and when he didn't have him anymore. Let's see... I love your use of repetition, showing how every morning is the same and yet special. And I adore the last line - "Coffee no longer existed in the mornings." Beautiful.
Sploogal
2003-10-04 . chapter 1
this seems a little pointless (dont take that the wrong way) but its really cool anyway - i love it! also, i dont believe in coincidences (mostly) and i was a little freaked out by the fact that i just finished reading your fic 'sleepless' (which is also great) and then went to this one and found that it was by the same author. hm... strange forces at work here... keep on writing!
ereli
2003-10-04 . chapter 1
sirius dies in the fifth book. so your ending is eerily appropriate. mourn for sirius black!
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