Does seem a bit muddled, but I like the dialog. And did Roger slap Jack? Wouldn't be out of character for him to do that, I think.

Finally another Jack/Roger!

I liked it, but I think it should remain a oneshot. Much more LOTF that way.

To the C2 it goes! _

Huh, kinda weird but good I suppose. Depends on how you look at it, really. Well I like your writing style, thhough the plots a bit muddled. Good over all fic!

M. Roger/Jack *drool* Write more! Very good so far. You jump right to the point.

Allykins