this was a great story. it almost made me cry. you write the best romantic stories!

...O_o...

That's so sweet! Very! Am I too late or what? Anyways! I never thought anything like that could happen! How sweet! You're a fantastic writer! Now, If I could be more like you then, maybe something in my mind can come up with a story... maybe.

...I'm still stunned, pretty cool... and it's sad... it's like my soul just ripped out of me when I've read it, and maybe the same thing probably happened to you, too... eh? Ja ne!

I have pain in my heart...aw! what a sweet story! Love it..

Mariah?

YEAH!

Love it!

Like it!

Want more!"

Yay!

Nice one Shinigami!

Sorry I haven't been on for a while.

Exams and writer's block.

Write more!

BladeBreaker Girl

Yay! I like it when you write one shot's please write more Shinigami.

omg, ur 13, and u can still write such cool, ok, not cool, wait, i dont have a word for it...but yea...thats cool...i guess some humans beings are just born with talent!

AW how cute! love the story and please keep up the good work!

Mieco (used to be Jewel!)