very good

weird yes but interesting! ;)

EEW! HAhahaha! I thought it was really funny, but eew! I do not want to imagine those two sexy men having sex together, ew!! lol, ok, well good story though! YAY! *esme*

This was good, and very entertaining. Only I'm pretty sure Will wouldn't use the F word. But, whatever, you know? You seem to be a really big fan of Stephen King, what about Sylvia Plath? She's quite morbid, and fantastically brilliant. Well, anyway, nice job!

Next visit? Are you going to write about it?

yes, my first reaction would be ah!
but other than that small aspect of my personality, i find this well written and meaningful, i wish you writer's blessings,
write more,
aye cully.
girlgunslinger

NO! How could you do that to Will and Jack!?! I shoulda seen it coming, but NO - seriously! It was so cute! (See how I dislike slashy? Yesh, but your writing is still exquisite) I loved the:

"Nah, I’m lookin’ fer Will Turner. Tall chap, brown hair, brown eyes. Acts like a eunuch."

Ha ha! Perfectly in character, totally... That made me laugh. Anyway, please keep writing (as I've reminded you before) And make something non-slashy and romantic cuz it's cute :P hehe. Actually, slash is ok if it's not Jack/Will. LOL. My Jack is NO man's man! heheheh. Good luck! :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

lmao... aww...
when did you start writing slash?
i gotta have another looksie at your bio... ^_^
well, umm... it was nicely written... lmao..
yeah, i'm in a giddy mood today...
no sleep can do that to ya ^_^
Sincerely, SimbiAni... luver of all that's sappy, cute, & aww-some!!