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| Methianeth 2008-07-25 ch 20, anon. | abuseYou just HAD to leave a cliffie and not update for TWO YEARS! I love this story and hate it to die. *fumes* Finish it or I will be forced to kidnap you and MAKE you finish it! One thing I've noticed though, is that the grey team is taking all the bad stuff. But whatever. And Blitzball is an underwater sport from Final Fantasy X/X-2. |
| Someone 2006-10-26 ch 20, anon. | abusecome on, please continue this! |
| Silenius 2006-07-28 ch 20,  | abuseLove the story. Hope for a combination of LuccaxCrono, and perhaps a bit of FrogxHarle. Definitely going in my alerts section. Keep up the good work, and please do your best not to let this story die ^_^. |
| Evergladelord 2006-04-18 ch 20, | abuse*Grinning maniacally* AN UPDATE! And the chivalrous frog begins to knock down the other team. Glad you've gotten going again. |
| asdfghjk 2006-03-29 ch 20, | abuseHey, glad to see a new chapter up! Yeah, I kinda noticed a lack of inspiration in the writing, but the fact that, three years after it's start, you're still writing it, that just shows your dedication! Don't give up writing this one, we're all dying to see how it ends...even if it takes ANOTHER three years! ^_^ Of course, I hope it finishes sooner then that, but do what ya gotta do! |
| nodikus 2006-03-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseAlright!! I thought you'd abandond this story. Please try not to take so long. |
| Someone 2006-03-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou've completely given up on this, havent you? that sucks. |
| Someone 2005-10-14 ch 19, anon. | abuseplease update! its going so well. |
| someone else 2005-09-04 ch 19, anon. | abuseThis was good, but why not any prolonged nudity? you have no problem forcing characters to stay in casts, silly costumes, and latex for multiple chapters, so I was hoping that the clothing lost in this game would be missing for a while longer. it also would have been nice to see marle or lucca lose clothing of some signifigance. you're doing good, but you're really teasing us. |
| Luigi Mario: KOG 2005-08-19 ch 19, | abuseWell, I've been reading this for a while now. Didn't bother reviewing, though, because I really have nothing to say other than "nice story." Anyway, I don't want to sound like an **, but isn't it about time you updated? I like this, and hope to read more soon. |
| Evergladelord 2005-07-27 ch 19, | abuseGood chapter, though a little short. Update soon! |
| ShadoWalker 2005-06-27 ch 19, | abuseYay! I got six points! *claps hands together in joy* ... Of course, they don't really mean much, but hey, it's still cool to earn points. [Hmm... I do appear to be slightly hyper today.] I'm not really too upset about Korcha's fate (particularly with this interpretation of him). But I do think that both the dare of being turned into a demi-human and the dare of being the fun house slave for 24 hours would be quite interesting to read about. (Though I suppose the revelation about the dungeon ought to be at least mildly interesting...) Oh, and there were a couple of spots where you wrote the wrong character's name. For example, when it should have been Leena who was released, you wrote Serge. One final comment, you said coming "this summer". What are the odds of that, or will it end up being, "this fall" instead? |
| Megamickel 2005-06-26 ch 19, | abuseAh... took long enough... But it was well worth the wait. Great chapter. I hope you had as much fun writing it as I had reading it... |
| nodikus 2005-06-22 ch 19, anon. | abuseBoy it's been a long time. I must have missed your last couple of updates and i've kinda lost the story thread. Still as good as ever though. Have to find time to read it from the beginning. Keep up the good work. |
| asdfghjk 2005-06-20 ch 19, | abuseHeh...kinda sad to see Korcha go, but alas, someone else had to get kicked out eventually. Looking forward to the next chapter! |