This is really powerful stuff. Extremely intense and fantastically written. Wow.

wow...can we say INTENSE? stolen, eh? well, i agree, draco. stupid potter always getting all the attention...Oh well, you're still sexier than him!

Great story! i really liked it!

Wow. Very powerful, very moving. Love your word choice and your descriptions. I could FEEL what Draco was feeling. I knew why he felt that way, how, and what was going through his mind. Wonderful way to manipulate your readers.

Congratulations on an awesome ficlet. It was beautifully written, gramatically spotless, and was definately well-thought out and well-put together.

Best,

Aithne