Oh, shiny!! Uh, you kind of rushed the chapters- conversations especially. Just honest critique- but believe me, you were born to create a good plot! Pretty damn good. if I do say so myself. NaruHina is an AWESOME couple, the best in the series. (Me- Chyaa!! Damn right, they are!! Other Me- Quiet, you!) Okay, so I have options (Know fully that it is also an option to use these options ^^)

- One -
Naruto, Kakashi, Sasuke, and Sakura had searched high and low- no sign of the bashful girl. Naruto grew more anxious to find her by the minute- and his teammates could tell. Sasuke grinned at him on their way to Suna. Naruto shot a dirty look at him. "What?" Sasuke merely shook his head, still grinning. "Nothing." Kakashi had business with Gaara- he had good intentions and was powerful, especially in the sense that he was Kazekage... perhaps he could send a few Sand shinobi along for the ride.
Then the conversation with Gaara, the outcome, yadda yadda yadda...
(PS- Just a little reminder- lolz Orochimaru didn't kill the Fourth, the Fourth died when he sealed the Kyuubi inside of Naruto. Haha, but if you're as big a fan as i am, you might already know that ;))

*For finding Hinata*

* It really is Orochimaru-no-baka who kidnapped her.
*Naruto fights Oro to the death.
*Naruto ends up releasing Kyuubi in order to kill Oro.
*Kyuubi takes control of Naruto.
*Sakura finds Hinata and releases her.
*Hinata sees Naruto after he has nearly finished off Oro, but Oro tries to absorb his chakra to heal himself.
*Hinata wraps her arms around Naruto, begging him to change back.
*Hinata stops the transformation with a kiss on the lips.
*Naruto remembers, and once changed back, he returns the kiss.
*Naruto confesses his newfound love for the girl, and Hinata admits her crush as well.
*They return to Konoha.
~END~
Phew!! Okays, now you don't have to use these, they're just suggestions. Oh, and you won't find me on - I'm only eleven. T^T Anyway... i agree.

KAKASHI IS SO THE SEXIEST SENSEI EVER!
-Sora-chan

Is there going to be another one any time soon?

Man...Sakura is so annoying I just want to strung...ahem! Anyways, Ino and Sakura combine can be a deadly combination. I like how everything is going. Short but good. I'll read the other chapters some other time. Its late and I have work tomorrow...

Danny

why wont you update? =O

THIS WAS A TRULY AMASING FIC. I NEVER READ THIS SUCH BEAUTY. 2/21/06. CURRENT DATE IN 06. YOU ARE ONE TRULY GOOD AUTHOR. SANKYOU

I hope Hinata's okay! She seems to get kidnapped a lot, I notice...

I LOVE the story please continue! *hugs* update soon! I love the NaruHina thing!

Please post chapter 10 soon, I would love to see your conclusion!

new penname...?

Um...question, by chance, you are also Ucchan and Tomo-chan? Cause their's a fic with the exact chapter to yours by the same name...

good story i really like it and i think someone took her who wasnt gaara who knew sumin was goin to happen just not what it was and hes following hinata and her captor

oh no! hinata captured will the story be a naruhina in the end?!

Lemon, lemon!

*dies* No! I need to find out what happens next! XD *shakes fist in the air* :D Pleae continue, i'm totaly lovng this. ^-^

Update, Update soon or feel my wrath.