Not really...but I'm looking forward to this!!**deathtoEmiliecoughcough** Sorry. Looking forward to this!
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Hm, I'm confused, but good chapter.

So, I'm a bit behind the times, but I definitely love this story! Anyways, just a little thing - you might want to look over your draft before you post; there are just a couple of simple mistakes that could easily be fixed. Still readable.
Again, wonderful story.

Oh, awesome! Hm, yeah I have theories. And, kudos, because I find this to be a very original story - which is rather hard to find these days. I've always wondered how the whole re-assimilation of Serdio would work and now I can read and find out!
Cheers

Heh yup the guys are in for it now! Hell hath no fury like that of a ** of Rose... or Raizel in this case. Hey is it just me or does her name sound like someone's from 'Willow'? Can't remember right now.

--And he greatly doubted that a man who wasn't even awake would appreciate smelly things.--

YES. XDD That was great.

ooh, excellent chapter. They finally found out their names! lol. Lloyd n' Zieg...thought so, and i BET Raizel is ROSE! Muwhahah! hhe. Well, continue, i wanna see the next chap. AND

YOU DELETED DEMON SQUIRRELS?!??!

ALBERT!
;.; You've made me sad, he better be alright... Or it'll be YOU getting stabbed.

Lloyd fan art? Fun stuff I shall have to go look later.
Anyway you might want to reread this, there's an intresting typo in it.

Aw... You already did the question thinger didn't you. Aw well.
Charle Brainwashing?! WTF that freaking funny!

>.> Hm... Plot? Yes intresting, I believe you hooking me now.

I'm not sure you noticed, but this chapter is entirely in bold... XD Silly Sors!

Yep, dart's an idiot, and ** one at that. *nod nod*

^.^ I finally figured out who the freaking people are, damn I'm a moron. >.

^.^ Aw! Lisa's so sweet! I hope you do somemore with her soon!