great! follow me i love your story! acrualiza please fast! I'm dying to know how it will be the next chapter! : D

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Can u update? Please it has been 3 years from now? also Great story.

From: Seeking-hope

UPDATE! I tried to e-mail you, but it didn't work, so UP FRIGGIN DATE!

like the story

always liked this pairing

and hope u continue it or do another with this pairing

its been 2 years now but update...soon?

wens da nxt update

I like it please continue

Please? (writing muse next to her gives cute chibi eyes the 1/2 writing muse 1/2 writing demon gives begging puppy dog eyes._

Galacia: Oh no am I going to end up writing future dbz's in my spare time now?

(Both look at her)

Jynx unless we see updates. Yes!

Galacia: I have school, work, homework.

(they give her a look) Oh boy this is going to be a long month coming up isn't it? (Both nodd)

Right (she takes next look to translate into) "lock up your sanity we assume no responsiblity for it's loss."

Galacia: Please update and save me from a horrible fate thank you we like the story so far

This is REALLY good. Great writing too, which makes the story all the better. Hope you keep working on this )

Intresting...Please continue _

Honestly, the one dude said something like "in a situation that would never ever happen"

Krillen and #18 Have kids...wtf?

I think a famous saying is that if you can love someone you can hate them. Im sure it goes the other way around as well.

i have a fascination with pairings between Mirai Gohan or Mirai Trunks with #18. Its just i see so much potential for a story with that.

One little problem i have is how long the author note is for the first chapter...please god dont have conversations with Mirai Gohan or anyone else for that matter in them.

no...no...*squeak* no update...PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I love the story, i never read one like this before, a truely unique story. I cant wati until another chapter gets up.

Hey great story! I luv da pairing. I reckon sumwhere in da middle of da story you should have gohan being able to see again or sumthing. that would be neat as! Keep up da great work! :D

I really like this story because Gohan/18 stories are so rare. I really hope that you update this soon because it would be a shame for this story to end

Good idea for a story, I like how you decided to pair up Mirai Gohan and Mirai 18. Just a thought though will Gohan and 18 meet up with Trunks after he comes back from the past, maybe before, or it could be when the Androids are fighting Trunks after he's come back. IMO Gohan could find Mirai 18 because, well you have him fall in love with her and he would sense her ki (I think it'd be around an average human's maybe a bit higher). Hope you give us an update or two before Christmas.

cool, awesome, mahvelous... there's just not a word to discribe a MG/18(this seem like a movie rating?) pairing this good