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| Sanchara 2007-12-06 ch 12, | abuseAwsome Chapter and awsome story. I'm absolutly thrilled with how well you keep the characters in character. Even when you throw a situation at them that they wouldn't normally face, |
| Gothic-Rose2004 2004-12-30 ch 29, | abuseHey! Good story! |
| lala 2004-12-19 ch 27, anon. | abuseyou gonna' finish this? it's good...m harper and paris in the same story... dreams do come true! |
| rankokun alpha 2004-12-19 ch 27, | abusecant wait for the next chapter is harry kim a clone? or was he programmed? he's the only one i can think of that would be in the right place at the right time! |
| Stoko 2004-12-06 ch 25, | abuseHeh, very good writing. Keep up the good work ^_^ |
| shastalily 2004-10-24 ch 22, | abuseGood to see some more. Keep writing. |
| shastalily 2004-10-02 ch 20, | abuseGlad to see another chapter! I'm anxious to know what happens next. |
| shastalily 2004-09-12 ch 19, | abuseI like the interaction between Harper and a young Q2. It makes for an very interesting story. I also like how you show Tyr's soft spot for Harper. Good writing! |
| shastalily 2004-09-07 ch 18, | abuseThis is a very good story. Glad to see another chapter. |
| Stoko 2004-07-19 ch 17, | abuseI'm confused. He was supposed to spend a year on Harper's Earth, not a week. |
| Stoko 2004-06-28 ch 16, | abuseWow, damn, I really wanna know what happens next :P :D |
| Stoko 2004-06-13 ch 14, | abuseKeep it up! |
| Sarcastro 2004-04-06 ch 10, | abuseI'm hooked. I love AU like this! Keep it up!! |
| Acacia Jules 2004-01-29 ch 6, | abuseUm, Tom used to be renegade, his father threw him out after Tom was tossed out of Starfleet. Tom would know how to take care of himself. He's not all innocent. Plus there's all the training they do at the academy . . . And the percise reason Tom was tossed out . . . . . ` I'm just saying, he's not just some Admiral's son. |
| Drakcir 2004-01-13 ch 6, | abusecool 1 little point though, I think ur Tom Paris is a little... off. No offence, its just, sumfins not rite, he's putting his foot in his mouth 2 much if u kno wot i mean other than th@ its real good please continue |