|Reviews for Looking For Salvation|
| Little Tanuki 11/29/08 . chapter 5
Cool. Glad I found this one. It's quite interesting so far.
(Especially I liked your prologue - quite a good "hook" there.)
One thing I would suggest is that you do have a slight tendency to overuse characters' names. (Which can interrupt the flow of the story somewhat in places.)
Good stuff. Please keep going.
| Asphodel Lives 9/14/06 . chapter 5
Carry on please! I know it's been like forever, but we need more BP fics, there's none being updated!
| Gabsgrl 11/6/03 . chapter 4
Great job so far, please keep it up!
| Spencer 10/20/03 . chapter 3
Where the hell did Harry come from?
| CaptainKJ 10/18/03 . chapter 2
cliffhanger! wow...you got everything right, and that's good. Maybe you should devote a chapter to how Ronnie's feeling.
| Nancy 10/18/03 . chapter 2
I thinkit is reaklly good the plot and charachters are good too. You just need to add more detail. Ya know? Ya need to make the readers feel and see and smell the scenery
| Julia 10/17/03 . chapter 1
you gotta write soon cos thats a great start
| Pru 10/9/03 . chapter 1
So far the prologue shows there is going to be an interesting story ahaed. I hope there won't be much of a wait for the next chapter.
| Nancy 10/9/03 . chapter 1
That is a good begiging and you have to finish it! ttyl
| robyn 10/7/03 . chapter 1
you got my attension, cant wait to read more, excellent start!
| liz 10/6/03 . chapter 1
really good so far! continue!
| Danae 10/6/03 . chapter 1
| Anna 10/6/03 . chapter 1
Please continue... soon... I gotta know what happens! We need more Ronnie fics in the fanfic world!
Ronnie is my fav character... even though I hated Jeri Ryan in Star Trek Voyager...
| Joy2003 10/6/03 . chapter 1
Your story sounds interesting I hope you update soon :)
| Gabsgrl 10/5/03 . chapter 1
Great start! Can't wait to read more!