Cool. Glad I found this one. It's quite interesting so far.

(Especially I liked your prologue -- quite a good "hook" there.)

One thing I would suggest is that you do have a slight tendency to overuse characters' names. (Which can interrupt the flow of the story somewhat in places.)

Good stuff. Please keep going.

^_^ L.T.

Carry on please! I know it's been like forever, but we need more BP fics, there's none being updated!

Great job so far, please keep it up!

Where the hell did Harry come from?!??!!?!?

cliffhanger! wow...you got everything right, and that's good. Maybe you should devote a chapter to how Ronnie's feeling.

Hey author,
I thinkit is reaklly good the plot and charachters are good too. You just need to add more detail. Ya know? Ya need to make the readers feel and see and smell the scenery


lylas,
Your friend

you gotta write soon cos thats a great start

So far the prologue shows there is going to be an interesting story ahaed. I hope there won't be much of a wait for the next chapter.

That is a good begiging and you have to finish it! ttyl

Your Friend,
Nancy

you got my attension, cant wait to read more, excellent start!

really good so far! continue!!

Please continue!

Please continue... soon... I gotta know what happens!! We need more Ronnie fics in the fanfic world!

Ronnie is my fav character... even though I hated Jeri Ryan in Star Trek Voyager...

Your story sounds interesting I hope you update soon :)

Great start! Can't wait to read more!!