Well first off thanks for adding another story to the fanfic for LOTR. And for adding another great Legolas fic...they are the best to read for addicts like me! :)

But I was really disapointed by the third chapter. The first two were very well done and captured my attention, but when I started to read the simiarities between this story and the ones of Adromir and I was not at all happy, But I saw your note as to why you added the Manyan stone concept and understood. Her stories were very good and the stories unique. And it did fit the story line so far.

But after you incorperated this part in your story, I had thought you would continue as you had before. Like starting with letters explaining what was happening, that was very unique and pleasent to read. Your writing was fresh in the two begining chapters. But as the story went on I saw you lost it's originality and it took on a re telling of The Manyan stone stories with a small twist here and there. At first I thought you would just use the part about the crown prince's leaving and go back to an original story, but it did not happen, and again I saw more from Adromir stories with the bonding and blood unifying. Even the vow was almost word for word hers.

You are a strong writer and I know you did not NEED to use this for your story, ( your earlier chapters tell this) and I will continue to read your stories, because I see in your writting a good story teller but hope to see a lot more originality.

this is not a burn, just an observation. Especially since this was written years ago. :)

Cheers

Um, there WAS no 'Queen of Gondor'. Nor was their a King. In fact, Gilraen most likely NEVER ever even stepped FOOT inside Gondor. Arathorn was Chieftain of the Dunadain. They were of the Rangers of the North. They kept to themselves, and were NOT royalty. Arathorn might have decended from it, but he never had ANY sort of corination, never accepted the responsabilites as the Rightful ruler of Gondor, and therefor, was not King.

this, like all ur other stories, is excellant, but 1 thing confuses me in this last chapter. u say that arodiel used the powers of the noldor to appear on middle earth like that, but it is the inhabitants of Rivendell that are noldor elves, legolas's family is part sindarin and part silvan. more than likely u already knew that and it was just a typo, but i thought i'd mention it anyways. Overall this is a really great fic
HissoriOokami

a sequel would be nice:hint hint:

Neat! One of the best endings ever! Ranks right up there with 'Well, I'm back' in Return Of The King. Stop the presses! We have another J.R.R.Tolkein on our hands!

i expected arwen

die balefea, you made Legolas feel weird!

...and 100! *clears throat* I proudly accept this award for helping Naur reach the remarkable 100 review level. I would like to thank my agent, my parents, and especially myself for being such a faithful reader... Ok enough of that or I'll go on all night. I liked the story and was happy when Legolas finally was able to let his brother go...and best of all there was no sad ending that violated SPIOCE! I love happy endings )

99...

Ha! Finally, i promised that i would review,and im sorry that it took so long to do so...*hits computer with axe*
that was wonderful. I know that Legolas would do that for Aragorn in the blink of an eye, wow i think im gonna go cry again, so i will go.
*SpArroW gReenlEaF*

I think the story is wonderful. You really captured my attention. i like how you have the letters introduce what is going on. Keep on writting!

The story is going good...well great actually.- Better than what i can do. Don't like the fact that Legolas is raped but thet is a necessary part of the story. Over all it's a good fic, and continue writing.
sile

yea! good story! *claps* hehe. i liked. i read ur response to lyn and i think you responded very well to them. lol. Um...how would you write the sequel? Would it just go thru the years up to the fellowship...wait, that's alot of years cuz aragorn is 86 during the fellowship. lol. (T special extended version). doesn't matter. up to you! t2ul.
p.s. I haven't been writing lately so it may be a lil while longer before the next chappy comes up. lol. ttyl. much luv!

Bravo! A beautiful story all around! I loved it! If you're writing a new story PLEASE tell me! You can find me under my sister's pen name Roseblade22 on the story 'More Than Ordinary' just leave a reveiw or something. Yeah!

Wow, this was an excellent story. I loved the brotherly love and loyalty you showed with Legolas and Estel.
Good job!_