|Reviews for Ephemeral|
| katie147 8/17/09 . chapter 1
brilliant, really moving
| SamwiseAtHeart 5/29/06 . chapter 1
This is a great story. Well done
| namjai 4/17/05 . chapter 1
I thought your version of this scenario - Clark losing his sight - was superior to what the show gave us. I loved the opening description of everything Clark hears, a panorama in sound. And Clark blaming Lex for something caused by Clark's own misadventure was maddeningly in character. But despite that, I could really feel his fears and anger in the story.
| clarkoholic 3/14/05 . chapter 1
Wow that was SO great! I really loved your interpritation of Clark's thoughts and feelings on this issue. Great great job! I love your writing too, it's amazing! I have your Mere Mortal's trilogy saved to read on my vacation next week. I'm sure I'm going to love it because this was brilliant!
I can't wait to read more of your work! I hope you continue to write Smallville fictions.
| Kirsten-B 12/21/04 . chapter 1
This it showing a very negative Clark. And of course it's going a different way than the show is...
I don't think, Clark would blame Lex for his blindness, since he had been trespassing...
While reading it, I almost had the impression, that Clark would stay blind.
I'm glad you made it a happy ending, though.
Other than that, it's pretty good.
| j 3/4/04 . chapter 1
brilliant, that's an amazing story, well done. are you going to do any more?
| The Die Hard 12/5/03 . chapter 1
That was very beautiful. (You must be a sucker for spoilers, too.) I wish the show would do it that way. The blind people I know wouldn't have had that much trouble, but then, they couldn't break things with a touch, either.
| Dawnatella 11/2/03 . chapter 1
Wow what a great really are great at telling a story.
| butterflybrain 10/18/03 . chapter 1
Wow. That was moving and powerful. I started to cry partway through. I'm glad Clark starts healing though- yay! Amazing work.
| Khassa 10/6/03 . chapter 1
Poor Clark...great stand alone!
| kelly 10/6/03 . chapter 1
Great job! That was wonderful! Loved the flashbacks, it made it all the more interesting. Now that you've finished this, you have time to update your other stories, right?
| troubletwinintx 10/6/03 . chapter 1
WOW! Very emotional time for Clark but I'm glad it has a happy ending.
| A 10/6/03 . chapter 1
This was a very well written and interesting story. I think you should continue it but it's fine as is. It would be interesting to see how everyone reacted to him not leaving his barn. I'm sure his friends would have visited him you know. Well, great job.
| Rebel Goddess 10/6/03 . chapter 1
You really know how to crank up the angst! That was so incredibly sad and then so happy. I want more for sure. Excellent story. More Mere Mortals as well please. Sniff. RG.
| Anna 10/6/03 . chapter 1
Question: Where can I find Peja's Accident Challenge at? I'm always looking for writing challenges. Thanks.