omg i couldn't believe it was ned

it made me cry so good great start

I love this story! Whoa. Yeah. Ned shot Frank. Wow.

Anyway, I noticed when Nancy said, "It'll be all right, Frank," that she was talking to Ned. Is there a reason? Just wondering!

i liked it...it had a lot of suspense in it

Great sequel!

aw...how cute! Frank and Nancy..forever. ha ha

xoxo Diamond and Stars

Loved It! Great Story!

:D
Frank's so sweet!

Still hate him. Can't make me feel sorry for him. Nope.

UHHM... I don't thik that it would be that easy. He knows the tricks and the routines of the detectives because he has had to work with them.
I do hope that everythign works out well between them. Your next chapter should be interesting. Talk to you later!

Good cliffhanger but the chapter was too short. I have a feeling that the story is goig to be too short as well. I look forward to reading the next chapter. I'm sorry it took me so long to review. I don't always check this section becuase it isn't updated so quickly. Whcih is probably the reason why I have more reviews with the stories that I have up here. I'll talk to you later!

awe I love it... I read The Mystery of Elizabeth Drew today and then moved on to this story, I am glad I read it. I love Nancy Drew and Hardy Boys! I have read all but 5 of the Super Mysteries and own all but 11... I use to own 6 the 11 but my house flooded and I lost a ton of my books... ok I am not sure why I am rambling like this... _ its a great story...
(I never liked Ned anyways)
Happy Writing!

_ cool!

Ned is evil, Ned is evil, Ned will pay!
Sorry, but I'm really starting to hate the guy.
Glad to see an update, and I definitely like the new chapter. Hope you get another one up soon.

In this case I would say that Ned really is evil! At least in my story he was working undercover.
Ned is in for a world of trouble and not just from Nancy eother when they find out what he did. Who knows he might not survive. Joe sure can be a hotheaded young man when he is angry!