well, you sertainly impressed me... what i would give to write like that.. *sigh*
think i'll check if i find more stories by you, like the way you do things.. and.. well, that's all. bye=)

Wonderful, like all of your stories. You're a very talented writer, and I always look forward to reading your stories.

That was a really well-written bit. I would love to see you continue this!