It must've been absolutely HELL typing house elf grammar. I salute you for your throughness.

Wow. This is a very original story, I've never read one from Dobby's P.O.V. Lovely job with the talking in third person thing, although one recommendation I have is maybe a more spaced out format for easier reading. Great job, though!

This was really cute, and told from a very unusual point of view. It's going in my faves (:

This was, without a doubt, the BEST piece of fan fiction I have ever read! It's so original and I love the way you wrote in Dobby-talk! This was such an awesome fic! I am beyond words.

AHAHAHAHA! I have never seen anything like this. :grins:

Lol it's very sweet... slightly disturbing but lovely nontheless. I think it's quite easy to imagine Dobby gay simply because of his infatuation with Harry... Love it.

Cute as - and very original also

oh, thats so sweet *giggles*!! Hey? I was thinking about creating a harry and dobby story were, after fifth year harry lets dobby stay with him? They teach each other and a letter from gringotts and dobby taking a bath, gets dress in nice cloths that look alright and harry to! They can even go against the order *giggles* by leaving privet drive to go do some shopping! *giggles* Do you think that would be amazing story to read?I mean I will have to work on it alittle more but, if you have any idea's let me know!

Amazingly, it really sounds like Dobby. How cute.

aw what a cute story :)

lol omg that story was so cute. ahahaha who would ever have thought to wite a story about the love intrests of a house elf. I am glad that dobby came back, and I am assuming that dobby got back together with niffy. the last chapter had a sort of final feeling to it, so is it done? anyways it gave me a good laugh, keep up the good work.

That's so cute! You got the house elf mentality perfectly - no other species would find it romantic to clean together. Well done!

You certainly write Dobby well. I don't think I'd be able to do it. I like the story a lot... its cool cuz you don't see much about Dobby and he's a nice little guy.

Sweet, funny, lovely. And very Dobby-like.

Sweet. In every sense of the word.