Much better.

Seems more Kasumi's fault then Ranma's. She didn't bother telling him what
would happen, just a vauge easily forgotten worry. Isn't she the same
person who piled cats on him to see how many he could hold?

Not to bad but don't do what I've seen happen alot in these crossovers and thats underplay Ranma's skills and power. Expecial with the forbiden skills from the scrolls. Ranma would be more than a match for any of the knights remember that. This may take place before Saffron and Herb(maybe) but Ranma still had more than enough skill then to keep up with Happosia and Cologne. Also besides the Armaguriken and the Moko Takashiba he also knows the Hiryu Shoten Ha.

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I've read this fic before and I finally found it once more! I luv this fic and really hope you continue

This is a good story!! I have read Rayeath, but it was the...abridged version. (Yes there really is such a thing. It's a 3 manga set). I am really enjoying finding out about all the details that the abridged version left out. I am looking forward to seeing how Cephiro handels Ranma and vise versa. I am looking forward to the next chapter!!

Great another chapter. I am actually not a big Rayearth Fan but since my annoying sister likes to watch the thing I picked up stuff here and there. Like what you're doing with the story though I must say that I did not particularly like Kasumi since she was a bit harsh and OOC but I can understand why she's like that. But she shouldn't have be angry AT Ranma but his father instead and I like the fact that she apologized in this chapter. FYI, the Kijin Raishu Dan is a move from the Yama-Sen-Ken, not Umi-Sen-Ken. The Yama-Sen-Ken are the highly destructive art while the Umi-Sen-Ken are the silent and deadly one. Keep it up and hope there are a new chapter soon.
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Great!

Interesting premise. Essentially, given the hature of Cephiro, this becomes Man vs Himself (or his fears at the very least).
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Finally, maybe the next update won't take as long. I want to read more of Kasumi's role as well as Ranma's adaventures, so I'm looking forward to more chapters and lots and lots of adventures. Glad you're writing again, thanks.

GREAT!

Great!

Very good chapter!

I enjoy this chapter very much!!

Morsamare: I AM trying to create suspense, you know, and going around saying that all Ranma's fear amounts to is a bunch of rabid house-cats isn't going to do much.

And I know how much potential there is for this story. Problem is, I'm not a writer who likes to follow up on their story for long terms, so if you looked at the prologue, you'd notice "I encourage anyone to email me and pick this up as soon as possible".

Frankly, I got a rough plot written for the story, but that's a long way good Ranma/MKR crossovers like Duet of Pigtails. If you feel that the story could be better, please feel free to write down what can be changed or pick up the fanfic and write it yourself. I'll even help by giving ideas, but please don't write reviews like: 'Oh well, this could have went better' or 'Gee... I don't like how that went'. Everyone knows they can write better, and just you disliking something doesn't mean it isn't liked by someone else.

So, Ranma's greatest fear is out running around, I mean seriously is there anyone in the entire world you wouldn't rather have?! I mean his greatest fear isn't a tiger, or a lion or any other great cat, it's a house cat, a lot of house cats... Hell even the neko-ken is little more than a gaint housecat, overly affectionate, but dangerous when cornered. When you stop and think about it Ranma's great fear is really pathetic, and Clef's forcing him into that core of water knights is just about as much. In the end he has very little say in whether or not you'll help, that's Ranma's descision and only his. Anyways this story showed great potential, but I'm sorry to see most of it wasted.