i have no idea how many times i have read this but i love it i wish you would write more in this universe it was great. i have also read your rings story and love it also i read them every few months and find something new to appreciate all the time. do you also write under another name?

So CUTE!

wow. you should right more very good!

loved the idea for this story, it was great!

i like this ending to the anime...nice thoughts on the story and i like the ending...it makes me smile

I LOVED THIS STORY!^_^ I HAVE TO SAY IT WAS A BIT LONG, BUT I ABSOLUTELY POSITIVELY LOVED IT!^_^ MAKE A SEQUEL!^_^

That is, by far, the longest furuba fanfic I have ever read. It was pretty darn good, too. Funny how Momiji wasn't allowed to procreate, hm? That was one of the best parts. Keep up the good work!!

Sincerely, Nexa

Thought you should know- Akito's actually a girl.

So CUTE!

I usually don't do pregnancy fics, but this was priceless. With a touch of Beta, and maybe breaking it up into multiple chapters to make it easier to read, this would be even better! oh, I love this!

*dances*

teehee!

*gasp*

sequel!

DEFINITELY interesting. I think that I would like to hear more about this grandad and the yakuza, man that was a riot. you know, if you ever decide to do a sequel. I think that it would be a great idea.

that was an awsome story i loved it your very detailed hope you go on to write more fanfics

steph
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This was a great story. I especially like that little twist at the end.

OMG! I LOVE this story! and i think that Aaya would be the dad who the kid is embaressed by but all of her friends love and that she will be thankfull for when she grows up! my dad said that thats how his mom was. well, plz make a story with the 4 kids in high school! i'd love to see it!

Aww, KAWAII! I wanna sequel...really REALLY bad... i must go check for one...

the only thing that bothered me though is that your spacing between dialouge is wrong... oh well, i got used to it. Congrats on a great story...I'll be rooting for a sequel if I can't find one ^.^

this is very good
i like it and i think you should add just a little to it