Mwaa...that was very, very disturbing - wonderful writing, great imagery - your scenario for Haru's birth was incredibly visceral. Great!

Lucifer's fangs...Dark, disturbing angst seems to be your forte- the two I've seen so far have been done beautifully. This is going to be typed out, and stuck to my study wall, where I can read it whenever I wish, when looking for dark inspiration. The same goes for the other one.

This fic is simply, darkly beautiful...

Wow. This fic is gorgeous! I love dark stuff like this.

Wow...Wow...Wow...Your good...Your dark..we need more people like you...you are like I. Please continue sometime

That was disturbing, beautiful, and strangely believable (strange only because not even the manga would be this dark, I think). It was way too easy to see Haru feeling this, & the ending - I feel like I'm dumb for not knowing the truth, but even though he's in Akito's room it sounded like he killed Yuki... This was just very artfully done, & I loved it. My compliments.

o_O
*gulp*
That was... eep.
*curls up into a foetal ball and rocks herself slowly back and forth, whimpering. Twitches occasionally.*
(Well-written! And extremely disturbing. Kudos!)

beutifull
i hate yuki, and i hate yukiXharu
but this story is just beutifull

Wow I like. That was dark, but so good. I'm a bit confused though, I'm thinking it was Yuki he killed... but was it? O.O I suppose that adds some nice dark mystery huh? Great fic ^_^