Very interesting and well-written, and I love the descriptions as well as the comparison of Gilraen's 'day' as opposed to Arwen's 'night'. I noticed that in some of your other fics you seemed to be fond of sentence fragments, but I didn't notice any here - well done!

On a more cc note, mebbe you should put something about the femmeslash bit in the summary or author's note. I don't have a problem with it, but I recognise that some people might.

In short, great fic! 9/10

Woman nonaino woman

This is not fair! It's been more than seven months since you posted the last chapter. We want more!!

Update soon please!

*cheers* Huzzah, a Gilraen fic!
*frown* Aw, make Elrond as kind as summer, please? I bet he really has a soft spot for Gilraen, anyway. *smile*
This is cute. Going to continue?

Beautiful story so far. I like the way you portray Arwen, a lot merrier than in the books/movies. It makes sense, because in your fic she still doesn't have to deal with troubles. And Gilraen, well, she is not a very popular character, so it's nice to read something about her. Please update soon, I can't wait to see how the story develops.

P.S. I mean it! I can't wait!

fluffy femslash! i'll have to some back when there's more up

This is perfect. I could feel Arwen's happiness and I could feel Gilraen's insecurity. You are amazing. Please, please continue!