This is a really cute oneshot, though kinda OOC, but still good nonetheless.

Yea, it's a bit sappy but I loved it. It was also cute and funny! Ah, I haven't read a better one-shot! It's great and I want to go on and on about it's greatness but I could go on forever and never stop. Of course I would be saying the same things over again. I liked this more than I expected I would- Okay, I'll stop! Great story!

Oh my goodness, that's absolutely darling! Sappy, yes, but very very cute. Really lovely -- not only is it adorable, but it's very well written. Kudos to you!

Hey you. Brings back the good old days, doesn't it? Love this fic, the fluffiness and the general fun. :) Leave it to you to make Pansy fun.

A cute piece of fluff, but I have to take issue with your characterization. Neville came off a little to forward for him to be in keeping with his character in the books. The change in his personality might have been expectable if it was justified with the proper amount of development, however due to the length of your fic this is not the case. Because of its length you would have done better if you had maintained the canon characterization. As it stands now, this might as well have been a Draco/Pansy fic, or a Harry/Hermione fic, it only needs the names changed. The idea of fanfiction as I see it is to experiment with pre-established characters while maintaining their canon characteristics. If a writer cerates a fic in which the characters are practically interchangeable, the point of the exercise is lost so is half the fun for the reader. As a Neville fan I was hoping for some deeper insight and analysis into his character, you lack of characterization does not offer this. Though I won’t say that you write badly or that the fic itself is not enjoyable, I do say that you should make a greater effort get into the minds of your characters and as such develop them more within the perimeters of canon.

*squee* That is SO cute. The fluff, oh the fluff, makes my heart feel all warm and tingly inside.