I love your story, but I hate your version of Akira. The way I see it, he's quite selfish abd arrogant. Although he slightly redeems himself in the end.

It's Hikaru no Go, not Hikaru no Self Doubt.

Interesting fic, putting Sai as Hikaru's brother.

It would have been nice to see more Sai/Hikaru moments...but I guess it's what it shall be.

But quite well written, especially the prologue. :]

Interesting concept, and pretty well written. I caught a couple of typos and grammar mistakes, but the plot is good enough that it doesn't matter much. Thanks for posting!

Your story make me cry! Wonderful work. Thanks for sharing

Ne, you could have made Sai a Fujiwara and Hikaru a Shindo if you'd just thought a bit. Divorce and remarriage *does* account for different last names and big age difference. Meh.

:) Good AU

So touching! I even shed a couple of tears lol.

thats it? omg u should so make a sequal! lol

Very nice beginning, too bad the story has stopped there.

oh my god! ur story was so damn AWSOME! Damn,i was blubbering throughout the story while i was reading it!

Read later (Sorry this is just a notis for myself, don't mind it, nya?)

oh! this brought some tears to my eyes.. hahah its impressive how you weaved all of that in and out,fits so perfectly. thanks for sharing. hopeing to read more hikago fanfic from you!

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*sigh* That was one of the GREATEST fanfics I've read... It was so touching and heartfelt - It was very real. I loved the relationships between the characters and how the responded to eachother. I loved it.

i loved the little skit by the end of the fic! HAHA XD

anyways, that was one emotional fic!

and i love it! XD

write a sequel, k?

it will be good to know how strong Hikaru is,

knowing that he stopped himself from playing Go all those years..

but still looking at kifus..

it would be interesting to know how he grows towards becoming as strong as Sai.. XD