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bubblegum-chi
2008-05-03
ch 6,
abusei loved the little skit by the end of the fic!! HAHA XD

anyways, that was one emotional fic!

and i love it!! XD

write a sequel, k?

it will be good to know how strong Hikaru is,

knowing that he stopped himself from playing Go all those years..

but still looking at kifus..

it would be interesting to know how he grows towards becoming as strong as Sai.. XD
brolly501
2007-10-29
ch 6,
abuseinteresting
vines-throughXfate
2007-07-19
ch 4,
abuseUsually I review the last chapter for whatever story I read, but I just had to say, this chapter made me cry TT__TT Loving it so far.
Cheska
2007-07-18
ch 6,
abuseAww you could've made a sequel or something. :3 But... it's fine like this. But it would be nice to have a sequel. >_
Cheska
2007-07-18
ch 4,
abuseOuchies, now what will happen? At least Hikaru finally shouted out what he's been angsting over...
Cheska
2007-07-18
ch 3,
abuseAw poor Akira. He really must feel like he was cheated out from a promise!
Cheska
2007-07-17
ch 2,
abuseWoah, he shouted it out loud! :3 Impressive~! Who~! Go Hikaru!
Cheska
2007-07-17
ch 1,
abuseOMFG! Sai died! I know it's not intentional on Hikaru's part... but heh... he was kind of to...blame.
Orodruin
2007-06-06
ch 6,
abuseAw. The ending was so sweet and Hikaru finally decided to play Go... It made me all nostalgic... or something. I like angsty stories especially when they have a happy ending, and especially when there's Go thrown in their somewhere, so... yeah, I really liked it.

But it's only the beginning of Hikaru's journey into the world of Go. I'm sure there are still many troubles waiting for him, because all of his bitter-sweet memories pertaining to the board and the game won't go away just like that. I can imagine that he would still have a bit of a difficult time getting back into actually playing, and if he ever decided to go pro, he'd get a lot of grief over being Sai's brother and all. Many painful subjects would be brought up quite often. Heheh, I could imagine Hikaru going kind of reclusive when a reporter asks him about his style resembling Sai's, and then Waya getting all defensive and angry on his behalf...

Yeah... there are some brief, vague ideas of things you could work into a sequel if you decide to do one. Anyway, it was nice... if you can call a fic about a guy's brother being dead nice.
Orodruin
2007-06-06
ch 3,
abuseAh... now it makes sense why Akira knows about Hikaru. I guess I just had to be patient... heheheh...
Orodruin
2007-06-06
ch 2,
abuseI like it. Hikaru no Go and angst--my favorite combination... right now. I was kind of surprised Akira had heard of Hikaru... but I suppose as such a famous Go player, nothing of Sai's life would have been left unknown, even the fact that he had a younger brother. I guess...

Anyway, I felt a need to review when I noticed what you said in your author notes about Sai's last name being Shindo... I was just thinking, he could have been Fujiwara Sai if he was half-brothers with Hikaru. It would also make sense since he's ten years older. Maybe their mother had some relationship with some guy when she was young and, well, Sai was the outcome. Then she married Shindo, so Sai would have his father's last name (or his mother's maiden name) and Hikaru would have his father's... Just a thought, but, of course, I realize you're already finished with this story, so it's probably not going to change any.
TheHamsterInMyMind
2007-04-18
ch 6,
abuseStunning. You made me cry.
priestessmykala
2007-01-20
ch 6,
abusegreat start!
Azurana K.
2007-01-09
ch 6,
abuseit's nice... i can't wait to read how shock the Go world would be if they found another new prodigy, so then i'll be waiting for an update, good luck...oh and by the way in this fic Akira's a bit off, er don't mind wat i had just said my opinions are useless...hehehe
Ao yuki
2006-09-07
ch 6,
abuseNice! There's really not a lot of good Hikaru fics you know. I can only manage to find 3 out of the many in that are good. I could recomend the fic 'Fujiwara' to you. It's really good.
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