I liked this story a lot...it was well written, and the emotions were handled well too. I was all set to hate it if you'd had Aoki and Karen just jump into bed, but what you showed here was quite believable. Well done!

YAY! Another Aoki/Karen fan! *tackleglomps* n_n I absolutely love this... Its a favorite story for sure 3 Beautifully written! My favorite part has GOT to be the ending though! XD XD XD Not that I wanted it to end, of course! But it just ended so perfectly 3 Great jon! I hope to see more from you n_n

Ja!

Damn, that was well-written! It was nice and kinda bittersweet. I liked it.

Lovely! Utterly adorable! Especially the way Karen's voice was already in his head, before they met and just in general the way you had your words shape the scenery. A beautiful read. _