I thought this was cute! KasumiXRyoga...very interesting couple! Good Job!

hey its cool! ehown are you going to update?

This certainly had some sweet moments, and I enjoyed reading it. I agree with the previous reviewer that the "age" thing sounds horribly contrived, and would best be done away with. I hope there will be subsequent chapters.

There are Ryoga/Kasumi fic very few. This one is done a little better then most are. The age thing should't matter and it kinda complicate things when people look at Ryoga and his behavior. Anyway I enjoyed reading it and can't wait for next story.

Good Story.

What the heck was that? One moment Ryogas fighting Ranma (proably over once again Akane) and the next he's falling for Kasumi? The sumary sounded intresting and hinted at a proper developing stage but then you have the two instantly put aside all the reasons they wouldnt be together (more like act like they dont exist) and the fact there has been no previous chemistry just too fullfill the pairing?

As overjoyed as I am to see another Ryoga/Kasumi story, (they're out there, but super rare) this one, well... It has it's flaws.

So here's what we're gonna do:

For the time being, you're gonna take this story down. It's gonna be a product recall, as it were. Just quietly remove it.

Then, we're gonna proofread it. We're gonna insert paragraphs, we're gonna correct some grammar, we're gonna edit some akward, stilted sentances.

And then, last but not least: We're gonna get rid of the Age Contrivance. Because really, that's just lame and entirely unnecessary. I mean, really. If they like each other, the ages shouldn't matter. It's not they're THAT far apart.

I really wanna see this story do well. But where it is right now... It's somewhat dead in the water.

P.S: Read my story kthxbye.

That's just a pathetic attempt at writing a Ryoga/Kasumi story, I seriously suggest you don't continue since its just as bad as all the Ranma/Akane flooding the screens with the same junk...