how many times can i say it..wow (lesse thats one..two...)*ahem* sorry.

Funny how Link and his familly get tied into absolutely everything. Though, it makes it a much, muh better story. *in deep masked voice* Link, am your mother's uncle twice removed...

eh heh heh heh...

Wow. Wow wow. I really like the dream sequence, that was totally awesome dude. And i also like how Mido actually gets a grip and grows up for once. Beautiful run. Keep it up!

This is a wonderful story so far. I hope that you continue it until its completion. I thoroughly enjoy the ideas you have come up with regarding Kokiri society as it is not delved into by any known source. I hope to read more soon.

Thank God! I was worried for a second that Saria would have to reject Link! (Sobs) I'm such a sucker for romances! Wah!

This is a pretty good story. I like your explanations for everything, though I don't understand what you meant when you said Navi had a tail. Keep up the good work!

Very good. The depth that you portray Link and Saria is wonderful. It is a little odd that, though they have the body of children, they behave and think like adults. But It is still really well written. I look forward to more.

I will say this is probably one of the best novilizations I have read. it actually has some twists and original ideas in it, as well as explaining the reason for things in the game (like the hearts). Well done!

wow. I like the retrospective (or i think thats the right word) tells the truth lol.Im too used to the E rated game so the beginning came as a bit of a surprise to me, nonetheless, you tell the story very well.
one other thing, somewhere in the story you said that Kokiris grow up and can die of old age...Is that part of the real story? I thought that the Kokiris are always immortal children (game's perspective of course). Id like to know beause ill be writing a Zelda fic sometime in the future.