Oh...poor Takaya...but somehow I think in the beginning at least...Naoe did think like that. ;.;

Great fic! I hope I can read more of your work sometime.

Loved it, but would like to see more!

Hi!
I am putting together a list of MoB fic recs that I am making public. I wanted to contact you as the author of a fic that I am reccing and let you know what I'm doing, provide you with a link to the listing, and give you the opportunity, if you so prefer, to request changes to the listings or to state that you'd rather not be recced.

Currently I have linked this fic, "Cinders."

You can find my link page here: http://del.icio.us/Lady_Nara

Thank you for your time!

~Lady Nara

Yay! An MoB fic!!

Oh, /thank you/. Mirage fic. Good Mirage fic.

*_* I'm really, really trying to think of something intilligent to say in this review but my brain keeps going: OMG! That was so freeking good! I'm so jelous. n.n;

First, I would like to say I really like this fic. To bad it's a one-shot. For the most part the fic is perfect. The only error I noticed was that a word or two was missing or repeated. Proofread! POV's are difficult at best. I think you captured the moment perfectly in this fic with Naoe revisiting the moment of the 'meeting.'I think you conveyed Naoe's thoughts perfectly. Overall this was an excellent fic. Hope you write more. As a fan of Mirage I noticed how little is available for this fandom.

A wonderful look into Naoe's view on the relationship! I enjoyed it a lot; it's interesting to see initial events revisited when you have further knowledge of the series.

Ah, someone has the manga (or is it the novels)? Either way, very jealous...

oi :) didn't think of reviewing officially. Kind of silly of me. Since I haven't seen you online in awhile here goes :)

BETA! ^_^ nihon ni sundeiruno iiwake niwa naranai yo!

Other than that I loved Naoe's first impression of Kagetora-sama :) ::sniffles:: but, where is the "Where is your hand now Naoe" reference :( :(

Send message to my IM and let me know when you're online!!

ja ^_^;

Finally, some Mirage of Blaze fan fic! I've been looking for this ever since I was lucky enough to discover this series, and consider myself fortunate that the first piece of fiction that I find is as excellent as it is. ^_^

I really like your writing style and think that you have captured the character of Naoe wonderfully. Please keep writing!

Neat. I haven't seen much of Mirage of Blaze and its hard to find stuff about it, but I'm glad i found this fic. more please :)

You did a really nice job of capturing Naoe's thoughts. I only found a few minor grammar errors but not enough to take away from the fanfic. I actually only found them after reading through it again. It's a really nice fanfic! I really do hope you write more!