Really good

Great story! Love it!

I really like this fic and where you are going with it. I do hope that you will continue updating this again soon as I would like to see where the relationship develops between Harry and Severus and I hope they develop a close mentor relationship.

Great story! I love the different POVs, and the fact you made their reconciliation a slow process. I remember what you said in the first ‘phoenixes’ story, about hating fics that have ‘quick fix’-relationships, and I agree; snape and potter’s relationship has never been that amiable in the books, so it would be highly OOC for them to be real chummy right off the bat. However, I also love how you made both of them able to begin overlooking past perceptions to get that ‘new start’ that they need. Kudos to severus for being a little more patient, and a lot more descriptive w/ his explanations! I hope you plan on pursuing this fic… however much I like your first ‘phoenixes’ story, I think I like this one better, and that’s saying something!

Hi,

I love this story and your other Phoenixes stories. I hope you update them.

Keep up the great writing!!

Katy

Hey the story is still gr8!keep it up!

Any chance of getting more updates on this? Pretty please? You've got a good beginning to an interesting story, and I, for one, would like to see where you take it from here. Keep up the good work. Zafaran

zafaran at fastmail. fm

This is a wonderful story! I am truly enjoying it! Your portrayal of Severus is excellent, and I can't wait for your next update!

really good chapter! UPDATE SOON PLEASE

*devilcoolgirl6*

I added this one too. :)

Excellent! Update soon.

=D Here I am finishing Chap. 7 and I look down and find theres no Right Arrow button for me to click to go onto Chap. 8, and I'm like "WHAT?"

So inorder for me to go uterly insane, please update =D And trust me, it will be for the good of all of us. You really dont want to see me insane. =D

So with all my ramblings.. basically, "update.. (and in the words of our dear Poppy) "..or else".

=D
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hm interesting...i enjoyed it altho ur depiction of harry and snape are off..continue!

Just read the whole story from start to finish. I hope that you have not given up on this. It is very good. Please continue.

Write more please...I like stories that have Snape and Harry becoming friends