I really did love your story! I love ginny/sirius pairings.

wana wana more now want to change to m

That was very simple and there were a lot of grammatical errors. Excellent pairing though.

This was really good! Please write a sequel!

Oh it is beautiful, I've never read a fanfic like it. I'm writing a gin/siri fanfic too and I thougt I was the only one. if you have time read mine too. we can be review buddy's.

I like this ! But Lily is not so unpopular as Hermione ! She is not a stupid miss asking!\
But this story is fan!

what a girly ending. In a good way. I liked it but it was girly. I mean I'm a girl, but a romance tale should be like the lost anime 'The Visions Of Escaflowne. youn should buy the series. You won't find it on T.V. though, they took it off after it's fifth episode, too violent. good all the same. I luv your stry anyways.
s.s.harry

Hello there, I just a have a few things to say and here goes :


Sirius escaped from Azkaban to protect Harry. HARRY.

Harry never liked Ginny the way she liked him.

Sirius and Ginny were never close.

If Harry and Ginny ever had a relationship and eventually broke up, Sirius would still be talking to Harry, not comfort Ginny.

I hate to push my bluntness, but I honestly think you’re just using the character of Ginny to satisfy your own selfish desires, which I think is making Sirius fall for her (Maybe because she’s your favorite and only HP character that you would like to be), not mention that you keep on using her name at the end of your author notes.

Most of the fans who reviewed your fanfic likes Ginny and is their favorite character as well, and most of the fanfics (Which I’m sure at least 95% of you reviewers wrote, and yes, because they like Ginny too.), in this category revolves around Ginny anyway. Maybe your readers/Ginny fans really thought it was bizarre, new and rare to see a Sirius/Ginny fanfic, for they thought it was nice for their favorite character to be paired up with a handsome (Well, he was described handsome in the books.), not to mention a significant character in the original story, and an ideal guy for a lover, so please don’t associate the enormous number of your earned positive reviews with my comment. It’s the way you and your readers see things and what I typed here was from my own point of view therefore they’re not connected.

This fanfic is almost indifferent to all those mary sues out there that I’ve previously came across with, though, of course you won’t agree.

Lastly, I’d like you to know that I don’t take phrases like “Hey! It’s a fanfic, so beat it!” or “If you don’t like it, don’t read!” for an excuse. It’s not bad to be criticized once in a while, though, it IS just a fanfic and it’s being called so because the fans are the ones who write them, but being the author and all, it is still your responsibility to keep the plot believable and practical as much as possible, and, worth reading not only for the Ginny tribe (Though, I really think only the Ginny fans are gonna be the ones who’d like to read this sort of fanfic, where she’s the star and all, but I’m an exception! I’m not a Ginny fan, still I read it! ~_^), which is the challenge of doing a fanfic with alternative pairings. (Did Black even have an original partner?)

Please keep in mind that I’m not attempting to put this story down, but the way you wrote this fanfic only proved it stronger how much authors write not for the sake of the character, but just plainly for the sake of the pairing. Especially that part where Sirius asked Ginny to marry him. I’d like to say that he was very ooc back then.

I hope you found this little rant worth quite some of your time to spend reading, for I tried my best to make it sound detailed and specific, and that it made sense with your fanfic.

-Critic

I am really liking this chapter so far. I think that it was a little short and really rushed but nothing horrible. You have an interesting plot going and since I have never read S/G before I'm am willing to overlook that.

I was a little surprised that Harry took the news so lightly and even more surprised when you kind of just jumped into the story. Which is fine since most authors dwaddle on inconsequencal (spelled wrong) details. On to chapter two!

Very, very nice fic. This is what, the third, fourth fic of yours I've reviewed today? lol.

Anyways, I liked it a lot, and you explained how Sirius and Ginny came to be together excellently, though the part with the beast could've been explained a bit better.
I liked it.

::tear:: gah! now I love Harry too though! ::sob:: that was truly beautiful! wow. :') I'm all caught up in loving Harry too, but completely loving Sirius! gah! Why can't I be Ginny?!?!? ::tear:: still, that was wonderful! wow, just... wow

GOD I HATE YOU, no this is not a flame, okay, i printedthis out and read it in a public library and I CRIED IN FRONT OF EVERYONE, i was soooo embarrased, but i love you story sooo much!!!

coolies!!!!! but, this is weird, cause Sirius is old enought to be Ginny's father...

I thought i had left a review for this story a VERY long time ago. This is my MOST favorite story on this site. I love it. It is so good. I could go on forever about it, but i won't. Very good job.

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!! So sweet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And VERY wel written!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I would tell you to continue, but you left off at such a good stopping point, that, well, you know...anyway, LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!