Serious review now:
Some parts very funny and some parts trying to be funny but get tiresome - try to have some variety.

What the hell is this **?

Funnyfunnyfunny. As random as random can be... That's it - no constructive criticism here. I like it though.

Wow, still hilarious, sorry about not replying to that E-mail, didn't know you wanted me to. Anyway, I like this, I'm a huge FFTA fan.
The part with the arguing was great, so was Alex's note. Famfrit was funny too, although...I wish I could've beaten him that easily...whatever, it was great.
Please continue soon, I wanna read more!
Lu Xun 88

You
suck
**.
.,.,.,.,.,.,.,
This
story
sucks
along
with
the
rest
of
the
crap
you've
put
on
this
sight.
.,.,.,.,.,.,.,
Fanfiction.net
should
not
go
through
this
torment.

this is the funniest thing i have EVER read. ivan the moogle!?!?!?!?!?! he certainly fits the role!

This isn't even remotely funny. Please take it off the site.

Mwahaha! Well, nice going! Try to put in every mission, including the ones like "You recruited Ezel" and the Judgemaster end missions (in case you haven't played those yet, sorry 'bout the spoiler.)
Other than that, pretty darn good!
-8BTFreek

** you, can you not LAUGH? Do you not know the MEANING of laughter? Or is your brain too small to hold anything else that this **. I hope you burn in hell, along wth this fic.

It was hilarious but...Yoshimitsu and Link? I have nothing wrong with it, it's just the second time that I've seen a SoulCalibur 2 reference in a Golden Sun Fic (Although, the first one had Mitsurugi and Nightmare...BUT NO TALIM!) Sorry, Talim's my favorite SC2 Character, although you probably don't care...Anyway, sorry about that, I got off topic, it was very funny, please continue.

Ivan: Haha Garet! You mucked up your only chance of fame and forture!
Garet: And you just mucked up the rest of your life by saying that!(Chases Ivan with a chainsaw)
Me: Um.. Ivan just how much happy juice did you give him?
Ivan: A few litres. Why?
Me: Omigod

>(OO)< it was uh...weird...but...I LOVE FINAL FANTASY TACTICS ADVANCE! GO DESSIE! GO DESTINYOFTHEPAST! wait...dessie and destinyofthepast are the same...¬¬ i'm a idiot...NOT! HAHAHAHAHAHA! ¬¬

Me: Hehehehe! Funny!
SpasticDjinn: Hey Ivan, kupo! You're as much a moogle as I am, kupo!
Ivan: I dont want to be a moogle!
Me: Too bad!
Me: Now more to the topic..
SpasticDjinn: Funny! Keep it up!
Ivan: You said that last review
Me: Shut up!

I wonder hoe painful it was for Alex to be tortured. I want more!
SEE YA!

Good thing I'm just a reader.^-^
I'll visit you in prison too.
SEE YA!