Great chapter, great story! The characters were written really well! Excellent work!

I really want to strangle Ecklie...so many, many props for making me that angry at a fictional character. This story is awesome, your characterizations are perfect, your dialogue is great, and I can't wait for the next chapter!

e please post more :D yay, they're standin' up to ecklie the craphead! hehehehe :D great work!
Lisa

e please post more :D yay, they're standin' up to ecklie the craphead! hehehehe :D great work!
Lisa

OOh OOh...the plot thickens. Expert characterizations. Loving it.

This is fantastic,Psyched! I'm glad you have them already established in a steady relationship instead of subjecting us to the same old emotinal yo-yo of so many G/S fics. And now it's between the geeks and Evil Ecklie...Please update soon!

I'm really enjoying this. Can't wait for more!

Nice twist, I like the whole Ecklie blackmailing deal, good job, keep up the good work!

Eh, okay, which next days? What's going to happen?

Oh, I'm so happy now. This was just wonderful. Awesome details. (love the blurb about her using his first name, very sweet) Perfect characterizations. Can't wait to see how life changes in the next chapter.

Hey, don't leave us hangin' here! We need that next chapter. ;-)

It was nice to see our favorite geeks outside of work. You've done a great job so far.

oh oh post more post more! :D this is a great start to a great fic :D
Lisa

Oh, you're not going to make something horrible happen that will completely kill the warm fuzzy feeling I got when I read this story, are you? Because I'm sensing some "not so good" foreshadowing.

Anyway, this was great, thanks for sharing it with us.

please write some more! I wanna see some more of this 'funny, quirky, even silly Gil Grissom'!