We lava beast fun :) And was that harry who just released it? Confusing. Finally I will go on record right now and predict that the blond man in this chapter is Draco. Oh and for future reference my house is Ravenclaw.

interesting

So this is a half dragon lance half harry potter that's been taken back up after a year or so?

gallandro_83

First chapter felt like a Dragonlance history lesson. Nice family interaction at the end here.

Just a guess, but I think Mishakal's the blue woman and Takhisis is the armored one.

Sorry-don't play Resident Evil, don't watch/read anime, do love the fics. The only technical thing you need to work on is clarity. Don't have the sentences constructed in such a winding manner that the reader is forced to read it multiple times. That is all. Good evening to you.
Becca

Very, very,very surreal dream. We got metallic dragons and a dark mark looking coat of arms. Nasty stuff. Then we have some sort of mutant kid. Trying to inorporate X-men are we. Anyway great stuff. And yes indeed the Chubb-Chubbs are in fact coming. There is only one way to stop them! We must pet them to death! It is the only way!

lol! Alter ego! I like the little band part even thought I have no idea who the scar faced man is. lol! I love this! I like characters with odd eye colours! It's really cool!
That Chubb-Chubbs show is weird! I like it when they make them applaud for the guy though! That's so cute! Do you watch InuYasha? I love that show!

Interesting. Very interesting. Of course Nuit Sol and Luna are from the DL series. Nuiutari is the god of dark magic, Lunatari is the goddess of nuetral magic, and Solinari is the god of good magic. Amd I can't find Lois's last name but im sure its in there somewhere. Anyway kudos for excelent work.

three gods are from dragonlance.

Kudos on the excellent story.

I finally read some DragonLance and you know what? It's pretty good! I love your story. It's really good!

love it! continue please

Series-Dragonlance

Luna-Lunitari
Nuit-Nuitari
Sol-Solinari
Nuit's mother-Takhisis
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