i think you posted chapter 1 as chapter 2, and chapter 2 as chapter 1.
nice story, btw... ^^

I was just saying dang Zoro sounds crazy talking to himself like that then my mom asked me who i was talking to and i realized that i was talking to myself OUT LOUD the whole time reading this XD

the ending was cute :)

well that really is a aprupt ending...but the story itself is quite nice. even though i think sanji and zoro went out of character a little to much in the last charakters. but its well written!

Ok, I understand that you wrote this in the eighth grade and taking that into consideration it's actually very well written. It just needs some minor editing here and there which I was able to do in my head as I read to make it work. However, I hope you'll accept this piece of constructive criticism. There is a line in this chapter that gave me pause: "Kell walked over to the bed and sat down. He wiped the pit of Zoro's elbow with codine and pulled the cover off of the needle."

I'm a medical professional so I had to point out that this line needs editing because 'Codeine' is a narcotic painkiller and it's not used as a topical anesthetic which is the only thing I imagined you could've meant. We wipe a patient's arm with a simple alcohol swab before using needles.

Other than that little detail I do want to compliment you on your characterization and for making your OC unique and interesting enough not to fall into the category of a 'Gary-stu'. I've actually finished the fic and also wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed it. Keep up the good work. :}

out of all the fanfictions I have read (and I read alot of them) this one captures luffys charicter the best! I believe luffy is a very hard charicter to manage in a story just because his additude is bazar but you surely did a great job at makeing his charicter the least oc. good job.

Aw Zoro is jealous

I really really liked this, but there's one thing that's bothering me:
in the end, who's on top? XD

XD Dearlord the Princess Bride bits in this had me laughing WAY too hard.
Rawrawr, I love this story. It's just too much fun. x3 I keep coming back to re-read it.

'GOMU GOMU NO WELCOME BACK SMOOCH!' ...Too cute! Tee-hee!

Zolo's clothes... Zolo's clothes... Zolo'sclothesZolo'sclothesZolo'sclothes! M, I do believe I nearly swooned. Heh heh heh.

good job on getting a princess bride refernce into your Leek soup for the swordsman story

You fool. You've fallen victim to one of the classic blunders. The first is never get involved in a sea war on the Grand Line, but only slightly less known is this; never go in against a Bullet Pirate when death is on the line!”

funniest thing ever!!

good job
luv Krad's Girl

homg... it just so happens I'm wearing a shirt today that has a picture of Vizzini's head on it and says "inconc..*looks down to check spelling* "inconceivable" on it... and then I read this...
*is tickled pink*
bahaha

Your chapters 1 and 2 are switched.

I love this story! Can't believe you first wrote it when you were so young XD I love your work, thanks so much for posting! The dialog and the storyline are especially great - you really capture the boys' personalities!

/That's twice today. What, do I have "Molest Me" written on my forehead?/

ROFL. I frickin' luv Roronoa Zoro. :D