Hey it's me, "Hitomi!" :) I finally made an account yesterday and put this story (along with others)on my Story Alert.
but the pename Hitomi was already taken. Hope you update someday!

Cute. I didn't like the first parts, but I loved this chapter. :)

GET YOUR BUTT ON THIS SITE AND UPDATE! I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR A YEAR FOR YOU TO UPDATE! PLLEAASE?~!

=] Have a nice day..

Hi there! How are u 2day? And yet how come u made ppl wait until u made the story is update ne? Gomen for complain about. Oh yeah, would u update soon and read my story too? And sent ur comment too? My story is Shaman Queen Spirits Power Up! From Yuki Tsuyami. Arigatou!

Alexiel is my character that I create her ok? Hhehe Arigatou!!

Yuki: Once again thanks!! Ja ne!!

Awsome (sp) If this is the ending its understandable, really good writing... But hopefully it's not the ending because this story just keeps getting better. Please update soon.

is that the ending? No

oh my gosh. you made me cry =) sniff sniff

Hmm...I would like you to write the whole fic as I don't like reading incomplete works, so I really hope you would complete it. And of course that's up to you...

Love,
Kagome Anna, forever InuYasha's.

Fantastic FIC! The plot is great, chap. 14 got me crying...seriously :'( DO NOT REWRITE THE STORY, but i think u should continue with this kind of writing, though.

you know, these type of scenes just make you go *swoon* and sigh dreamily before scrolling up and reading it again till your heart's content. Great job!

plz update :D

i like this =) i want more updates. This story is getting to the good part =P

Aww...How sweet! Love the last line. And yes, things are getting quite serious.

Okay... so I may be making a fruitless effort.

But really, this is a good story that is has a good plot, and a lot of potential. I hope you would continue... but if you don't want to, that's fine. I've known stories that just burn out in the end. ^^

- Nanthakon

Yes! Anna is sorry! But Aya loves Yoh too! And sadly I actually like her now... Of course not enough for her and Yoh to be together, hell no. But maybe Aya will meet someone of her own! Maybe! Yoh's long lost other brother! There were three of them, I swear!