Very nice. I really like Jamie stories and you did a very good job on this one!

OOps! Sorry for the double review. I got an error back on the first one and assumed it hadn't gone through. Being to lazy to re-write the whole thing I put a shorter one up. Please feel free to delete one or the other and this one.

Anise(AvP)

Very good. A very enjoyable story and sensitively written, pitched just right.

I thoroughly enjoyed that story. You pitched the love interest just right unlike someone else I know who was so sickeningly explicit in her sexual writings that FF pulled her Aliens stories off the site (no triple x rating). Well done you for a well balanced, well rounded story. Beautifully done. Kudos to you.