 alexa-catta123 2009-07-12 . chapter 4WRITE SOME MORE! Sorry... really liked it.:D |
 FlareKnight 2009-05-24 . chapter 4Well overall I like the idea behind the story. Getting Tai involved in that world would be a pretty interesting affair. Though I am struggling to figure out everything that is going on. So is this happening in a particular part of Tamers or is it like anime movies in that it doesn't fit in the normal timeline? I mean one chapter mentioned the giant pig attack, but Calumon is there and now Rika could biomerge. So I'm just trying to put everything together in a way that makes sense.
The fights do end pretty fast, but not like that doesn't happen in the series sometimes anyways. Good luck writing this since I'm curious to see how things turn out. |
 Mimi-dudette 2008-04-06 . chapter 4That was quite good, can't believe Renamon turned back into an egg :O
Please update soon ^.^ |
 sgarecool 2006-01-10 . chapter 3 theres no way Miotasmon would be able too defeat wargreymon so easilyXXBut other then that great chapie.6^ |
 sgarecool 2006-01-10 . chapter 2 Great story try too be more discriptive thought,^^ |
 sgarecool^^ 2006-01-10 . chapter 1 too short, you should make them longer, but sense its the first chapter its usually okay. |
 kokujogirl 2004-11-24 . chapter 4 piz update |
 GemmaniGirl 2003-10-14 . chapter 3o.O w-what oh man. UPDATE ASAP PLEASE! |
 dragi 2003-10-11 . chapter 2 hey cool story i love it please hurry up and update realy soon please i can`t wait to the next chapter. will agumon warp digivolve to wargreymon inn this story?
good luck with the story and next chapter.
love dragi |
 GemmaniGirl 2003-10-10 . chapter 2UPDATE ASAP PLEASE! |
 Noontide 2003-10-09 . chapter 1Loved it |
 GemmaniGirl 2003-10-09 . chapter 1UPDATE ASAP UPDATE! |