Reviews for The Great Pretenders

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BioDragon 2008-01-24 ch 1,	abuseVery nice and like how you did the transformation thing at the end.Jane/Daria is so fun.:)
Sofa King Danny 2006-12-06 ch 1,	abusealjda okay. I LOVE YOU. You have NO IDEA how happy it made me to read this. I love this pairing, and it's so wonderful to see a well-written fanfiction for them. It turned out to be way better than I was expecting it to be when I clicked on it. It's really in-character and well done, you have every character's voice captured so well. I can see it all clearly like I'm watching a real episode in my head. Although it's hard to understand in places which I think might be ffnet's fault for messing up formatting and things? You may need to find a way to seperate actions from dialogue, I think using italics or something might work. Other than that, I LOVE it. So much. The plot is just so great and believable and cute, and I enjoyed the crossdressing as well but that's just personal taste. This is excellent and totally made my day, definitely adding this to my favorites. :D
Alphawolf69 2006-09-08 ch 1,	abuseThis was fantastic. Crazy too, but I supose that's to be expected ;D I loved the dialogue between the characters and the plotline made crack up (Daria's reaction to Jane and Quinn wanting her to 'be' Darien was hilarious) the mental images you created were priceless ;D My only quibble with it was the layout (the stage directions got mixed up with dialogue and it wasn't clear when characters were thinking or talking - made it slightly confusing) otherwise, excellent stuff.
IndieMoviePrincess 2006-08-16 ch 1,	abusegreat storie, and i love the screen play format!!
Jayzizzle 2005-12-02 ch 1, anon.	abuseJane IS love
ThePurpleMoon 2005-11-20 ch 1,	abuseI read this story a while before, and had give a review this time when I found it. It's a really good story. I like it a lot.
Kilted Cadarn 2005-10-18 ch 1,	abuseAye that was a great story! MORE! MORE! MORE!
Raigeki 2005-10-07 ch 1,	abuse^_^. that was nice and sweet, and i really feel you got the voice of the characters down. i mean most people who write fan fics for tv shows and what not always screw up the character, i could totally hear them saying those things. only trouble for me was the formatting. sometimes i read actions as what people were saying, perhaps make it a different font for actions then for dialouge. oh, i found your interpritation of growing up, the concept of subconsious being realised as being very interesting.
icaughtfire 2005-08-19 ch 1,	abuseGood fic... I wanna write a Daria/Jane, but I'm not sure I'm funny enough to write a Daria fic. lol.
L neils 2005-06-01 ch 1, anon.	abusewow this was good. well written, and you kept the original characters fairly well.
Misty Wildfire 2005-05-02 ch 1,	abuseX# enjoyable to the greatest lol. Nicely done ^^ love the summary comment too lol
Lily 2005-04-30 ch 1, anon.	abuseGreat, well-written story. Pls do a sequel!
HecatonchiresLM 2005-04-29 ch 1,	abuseThat was remarkably restrained and well handled. I hated the script format, but thats mostly just me. A sequel would be interesting. I did get a bit confused about timing wrt when Casey and Tiffany had happened, and how long ago it was.
Master Fedora 2003-06-04 ch 1,	abuseAw...I thought that was very well written and alot of fun. Really good Daria/Jane stories are rare, thanks for writing one.
K10 2003-01-21 ch 1,	abuseplease please please write a sequel! I loved it. What an origional idea. Maybe you could write the reactions of family and friends when they find out about Daria and Jane.

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