great poem! i know what acrostic poem is, its when the first letter of every word is a letter in a name, motto or message.. im a smrat girl.. hehe smrat... anyways heres a poem for you...
Inu Yasha, why do I try?
Every time, you make me cry.
I run back to my own time.
For your temper to Die.
Because of you, I keep my feelings in hide.
On Kilala's back I ride.
With you as always, by my side.
p.s. no this isnt an acrostic poem
ashley
summer_sun26@hotmail.com

Nice reference to coper there, but I still find that an unusual simile to blood and anger. Why copper? Does it smell funny?

Hmm. Is this supposed to be Inuyasha's haori?

(reads quickly, eyes open wide)
'Sit.'
(raised eyebrows)
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

Poor Inu-sama INU IS NOT A JERK he has a kind heart he just dosen't like to show it sorry

hmm...pretty good...

Look, I liked the rymthes, but I just have one thing to say. INUYASHA IS NOT AN INSENSITIVE JERK! He is a very nice, kind, gentle, loving demon. He can even be caring at times. Yeah, I know alot about him, so what. He's cool.



Over and out.

Hey, your poems are funny and great! Write more soon. ^_^

Lol. How true. But wait, let's not forget his human form!

ha ha ha i love your poems!


they r so funny!

Nice Poetry! But the chapters are so short!

-Kita