This is simply... AMAZING! Keep up the good work! I love how believeable you've made everyone! Way to go! Its about time Riverdale High got sexified! :) One thing though, I think Archie sounds a litle too articulate, but it definitely doesn't detract from the story! Once again, this story is the best!

so i try and make it a point to not read stories that aren't completed, but i couldn't help it and i know you haven't updated in a long long time but PLEASE do! you could just do one chapter, deus ex machina (nice neat ending) style and i would be happy...some things though: veronica is definitely a little OOC but it sure fits the storyline and it's easy to imagine...also the incorporation of school gossip is very smart i like it..it updates the characters somehow.. good grammar and spelling, and PLEASE don't leave a reader hanging! keep it up!

Please keep writing this story! I want to see what happens. The story is well-written and leaves me waiting for more. :)
I also like how you are making Archie jealous and how Jughead keeps denying his feelings.
I'll be waiting for more chapters!

Please...*please* carry on with this. Five years isn't a completely inordinate amount of time to write a miniature masterpiece, but it is pushing it. Everything about this is superb. Understated, simple language, eloquent pace, and your dialogue is...*lickable*.

I haven't found truer or more flexible characterizations anywhere, and I'm not likely to. Just a few more chapters, and Bob's your uncle. So, come on. Throw us a bone.

Please?

I re-read the story again and to my delight you did update with a few chapters so :D I was very happy to see that.

But it seems you have stopped again! oh woe is me :) I really hope you get a chance to continue this story and finish it. You have a great story that's worth reading time and time again.

Hope all is well with you. Take care!

This is an amazing story! Please update! All the high school drama and tension is making this prom the most interesting one ever!

My fave parts were where Betty, Jughead, and Archie speak their minds out and start being real with each other. Sooner or later, Ron is going to have to put aside her massive ego and get a big dose of reality herself.

The part that impressed me the most was when Archie talks about how B & V treat him like he's a piece of property. I admit, that was the one time I felt sorry for him and that Betty is somewhat guilty of doing wrong. The way you wrote the characters made it believable, even with the occasional swearing (which would never happen in the comics :D)!

So please, keep the story going! This is one of the best Betty/Jughead stories on this site!

Reggie is still a man-**. heh.
Juggie and Bets' date was adorable. They ate dinner, washed dishes, and watched a movie! D'aww, freakin' adorable.
Ethel shot down Kenneth, who in turn shot down Ronnie. Awesome.
Bad week for Ronnine, ain't it? Eh, she'll go shopping, and she'll be fine.
Thanks for posting, update soon.

Liz

Reggie is a man-**. I find that amusing.
Ronnie is starting to worry that she might be losing Archie, and Midge and Moose are attached at the hip.
Ethel was asked to the dance by Dilton! Go Dilton go!
The teacher in geography kinda made me laugh. Silent classroom? Gah!
Thanks for posting, update soon.

Liz

Pooe whiney Archie. He loses half of his cheer squad, and hia whole world crumbles to pieces. Suck it up Andrews!
Ethel makes me want to roll my eyes. Juggie is not interested in her, and she needs to figure that out and move on.
Real high school life shown pretty well here. Nice job.
Thanks for the chapter. Please update soon.

Liz

Oh, PLEASE update and put me out of my misery! I mean there's not much of the story left I think! T_T

I love this story.

Madly, passionatly, sweep-me-off-my-feet, kinda of love.

Jughead is just.. awesome, and you manage to make the all the characters like themselves without subjecting one of them to be the one and only villain, and you have multiple points of view, which is lovely.

Please continue this.

Whoo! Jughead/Betty story! Good desprictions, a little OOC, lotsa forseeable fluff, and Ronnie bashing! i love it.
Thanks for posting, plz update soon!
And er.. since I'm lazy and stuff, I'll just review this chapter and the last one (when it comes!)

Liz

Your use of language is excellent, but I'm disappointed that it is taking you so long! Have you forgotten about it or are you simply a slow writer? Either way, you can never become an author. Dedication is key!
Love the Jughead/Betty thing though. A wonderful twist, fer sure!

under all that is mighty and good u got sumthin goin here.
this is great i always thought betty and jughead should be a couple and i do hope that it ends well from one person to another i beg of u plz update this wondrous story ASAP.
ty

oh man! this is great please update soon! love Jug and Betty!
love your story!