cliche? nah! i enjoyed this one very much! you have a great talent for making the character alive in words. please write more FF fics )

Uhm. Okay. I read this because I was trying to figure out which of yours I hadn't read, and I feel I can be a little more critical because I don't know the characters off the bat. First off, this story feels very rushed. I know you expect the readers to know the characters, but a little exposition couldn't hurt much. Also, I was a bit confused at what was going on. This is one of your earlier pieces, right? Once you finish One Heart, maybe you can revise it. All in all, it was a pretty good story. Some of the scenes switched so fast that I had to go back and reread to understand them fully. Not bad, but not as good as your current stuff. _

Wow. So emotional... I am in awe...

God, Dragoness... this is so... wow.

Makes you want a sequel to FF7... And Aeris to come back to life

This is really great! Hi, I didn't know that you was a Final Fanstay 7 fan. Too cool! Bye for now!

*sniff* That was SO good! I loved it. Very nicely written! I once wrote something about a certain someone returning to the Planet... well, sort of... I'm thinking of posting it. But it'll in no way compare to this thing!

Cool! I don't know that much about Final Fantasy but this is wicked!