This is an incredibly beautiful and sad piece. You've really tapped into one of the things that made B5 so amazing - the tangled and brilliant relationships, both between people and events.
Wonderful stuff. When I get my page up and running I'd like to rec it.

A sensitive, subtle portrait of Vir, his relationship with Londo and the importance of this relationship to both parties through showing us the alternatives. Well done!

What a fine piece of writing! Its only too bad that the story ends here, I could have read many more chapters for that matter...I hope you continue to write more stories of this nature its really interesting to read all the possibilities that could happen but never did it really makes you think :)

This was a really intence chapter I rather liked how you portrayed Vir exactly as he was in the show :) I cant wait to read more chapters as they come out...