I love it.

You have a great writing style :)

Interesting perspective...idea...whatever you want to call it. :P

I loved it! Although, I can't say I wouldn't love to see another Kenshin/Kaoru fic! That's always a plus! But this was, as usual, well-written, poignant, and very fitting/in-character! Kudos and thanks for posting!

Nice. I like the idea behind this fic. Nice and short&sweet.

-goes to your user profile- SHIT! *cough* I... mean... erm, I don't cuse... FRINK! Wow, you've written alot of stories... How on earth did you write them all? I don't even think I could work up the patience to read all the summaries...

Wow, you must have a GODLY dedication to writing...

Anyway... I gotta get going. It's getting late here.

Best Wishes.

That was very beautifully written! You're not satified with it? Well, even if you aren't it was still insightful and descriptive and it really forces readers to think (always a good thing).

I don't like giving criticisms, so this definately is not one. Maybe you should have ended it at "The stars do not enter my mind, but rather smile at the future, at the invisible, incomprehensible magnetism between a young man and girl in a well-known corner of Japan." I think it would sound a little better leaving it at that, but that's only my opinion. You don't have to listen...

Anyways, great job! Keep writing the way you do!

hey, nice story... I mean, poem, or whatever! Hehehe, you are so romantic! .

Oh, cute! I love how you personified the stars. Very nicely done! I love it!

How touching. I love your style and breaks. Put their whole relationship into perspective by setting them against the workings of the universe. Voice was right on, complete with all of Kaoru's apprehensions and of course fears.

Great job, I look forward to reading more of your work in the future!

Starhopper

awwe! neat little ficlet you have here. Original perspective, well-fitting voice.